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Camera:Pentax K 10 D Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:18-55DA
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:autumn....
Username:Bogdan_Fiscutean Bogdan_Fiscutean
Uploaded:2 Oct 2008 - 5:31 PM
Tags:Black & white, Girl leafs, Portraits / people
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LynneJoyce
LynneJoyce e2 Member 6LynneJoyce vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
2 Oct 2008 - 5:38 PM

Great idea but it seems a shame to lose the lovely Autumn colours. Couldn't you have left them in the leaves?

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Bogdan_Fiscutean
Bogdan_Fiscutean e2 Member 7Bogdan_Fiscutean vcard Romania
2 Oct 2008 - 5:51 PM

The next photo it will be with colors.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
2 Oct 2008 - 8:52 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Its an interesting shot, - quite nice.

I would suggest a few things.

As it is, it needs to be sharpened quite a bit, - this needs to be done after you re size the image, just before you upload it.

Im not certain about the crop across the face, - its a personal thing, but maybe would look better with the entire face, - or the crop taking the face exactly down the middle?

As its an autumn theme, - it doesnt necessarily need to be coloured - but perhaps some autumn colour left in some of the leaves?

I personally dont like heavy black frames in portraits, - too reminiscent of funeral shots for me!

I have loaded 3 mods:

1 is with the basic image sharpened

2 is with the same image toned with a hint of autumn colour

3 is with a new frame

Hope this feedback is helpful,

regards


Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 2 Oct 2008 - 8:53 PM

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