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Camera:Pentax K 10 D Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:18-55DA
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:face
Username:Bogdan_Fiscutean Bogdan_Fiscutean
Uploaded:25 Oct 2008 - 6:36 PM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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conrad
conrad  1010874 forum posts116 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2008 - 8:24 PM


Quote: Is this picture sending a message to you?

To be honest - no. But I do like how you have made her face the clear and very striking subject of the photo, with the city just a minor backdrop. What I don't like, but that may be just me, is how you cut off part of her mouth. A crop is fine and well, but I think it might have looked better if we had seen all of her mouth. And I think I might have been inclined to remove the spot on her cheek, which I find slightly distracting.

But I really do like the idea and mostly how you've done this. And let me just add that I think black and white was a very good choice for this kind of shot.

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