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First upload in a while, part of a new series, but may not put all of them up as some are very similar!

Hope you like!

please comment,

and please VIEW LARGE!!!

steve

Camera:Canon 1Dsmk2
Lens:DO 70-300
Recording media:iso100 raw
Title:Lauren sleeps
Username:Bogwoppett Bogwoppett
Uploaded:10 Feb 2006 - 12:52 PM
Tags:Nude / glamour
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skydivemike
skydivemike e2 Member 947 forum postsskydivemike vcard Northern Ireland
10 Feb 2006 - 1:05 PM

Good image....

Mike

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kaybee
kaybee e2 Member 103954 forum postskaybee vcard Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
10 Feb 2006 - 1:50 PM

Nice shot Steph.......but she needs some lippy (see modiification)

LOL


Roy

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gemm
gemm e2 Member 10800 forum postsgemm vcard United Kingdom
10 Feb 2006 - 1:51 PM

I love it. Fantastic shot.

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waynelittle
waynelittle e2 Member 8waynelittle vcard
10 Feb 2006 - 2:02 PM

very nice shot.

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Bogwoppett
Bogwoppett e2 Member 9Bogwoppett vcard United Kingdom
10 Feb 2006 - 2:14 PM

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! Not the lippy!!!!!!!



(Kaybee Strikes Again!)

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Glamrox
Glamrox e2 Member 10304 forum postsGlamrox vcard United Kingdom
10 Feb 2006 - 2:47 PM

Great shot, Like the lighting

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Titi
Titi e2 Member 10Titi vcard Romania
10 Feb 2006 - 2:48 PM

superb photo!! interesting composition,i like the choice of B&W ...well done..click

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bill777
bill777 e2 Member 11164 forum postsbill777 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Feb 2006 - 2:59 PM

Great shot. I have given it a little bit of a rotation in PS for a more dramatic diagonal and cropped in more tightly. (see mod) However, your version has a nice open airy feel to it.

Bill

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Bogwoppett
Bogwoppett e2 Member 9Bogwoppett vcard United Kingdom
10 Feb 2006 - 3:13 PM

I can see where you're coming from, bill, re mod.
thanks for the mod

steve

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UserRemoved
10 Feb 2006 - 4:49 PM

This is a wonderfully smooth shot Steve. The lighting is very delicate and really brings out those lovely textures and shades.

Beautiful girl too - obviously a very happy one as well judging by the expression on her face.

Classy shot.

Yan

Thanks again for all the great advice BTW. Much appreciated.

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david j. green
david j. green e2 Member 1059 forum postsdavid j. green vcard
10 Feb 2006 - 5:42 PM

The lighting and natural pose of the model look perfect here.

David

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Steven
Steven e2 Member 10Steven vcard
10 Feb 2006 - 9:27 PM

Nice serene picture

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nikon5700ite
10 Feb 2006 - 11:17 PM

A diagonal composition would be an improvement and I dislike the hot background, careless lighting IMO, or lack of control of ambient light.. the ribs are a discordant note on the rest.

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jamsa
jamsa e2 Member 10jamsa vcard United Kingdom
10 Feb 2006 - 11:28 PM

nice shot and with the look of natural light...

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vparmar
vparmar e2 Member 10vparmar vcard United Kingdom
10 Feb 2006 - 11:49 PM

lovely sleeping beauty works well in black and white

vinny

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Bogwoppett
Bogwoppett e2 Member 9Bogwoppett vcard United Kingdom
11 Feb 2006 - 12:47 AM

Thanks for your comments!!!

The lighting is exactly how I wanted it, nikon5700ite!!
Source was natural light, Janmsa!
fairly evenish spill from two roof windows directly above subject. I wanted a high key effect on WHITE! duvet, so she was floating in a sea of whiteness (like clouds, but obviously no real duvet can look like clouds!!!) and a smoooooth natural skin tone!
One modelling light to lighten the face slightly.

although the conversion was done in ps, I prefer to do as little digital alteration as possible.
So I could have taken out the ribs in ps, but I thought, no, it's all about natural here!!

For those who are interested, all the digital manipulation here is...
-conversion to tif from raw file, "cloudy" white balance, 0 sharpening, all other settings on auto or default.
-conversion to B+W (hue method) from colour tif file.
-Slight top and tail level manipulation of the histogram to bring the contrast where I wanted it.
-Re-size for upload, and a sharpening because people tend to say "too soft" or "unfocussed" if you don't!!

cheers
steve

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TimJ
TimJ e2 Member 11482 forum postsTimJ vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2006 - 1:16 AM

Lovely shot, very peaceful.

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simon butterworth
simon butterworth e2 Member 1041 forum postssimon butterworth vcard 1 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2006 - 1:48 AM

Superb tone and what a beautiful lady.

Simon

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highlander
highlander  1032 forum posts Scotland
11 Feb 2006 - 3:15 AM

Very nice glamour shot Steve with your beautiful model enveloped in a sea of white duvet which makes for a beautiful soft feel to the blend but not without good body and facial details. The balance of exposure is perfect.
Doug.

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hailslee
hailslee e2 Member 8hailslee vcard England
11 Feb 2006 - 5:49 AM

i think you should leave it as it is well done

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JouŠo
JouŠo e2 Member 1056 forum postsJouŠo vcard Finland
11 Feb 2006 - 7:22 AM

Wonderful shot!

Jouko

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kevluckhurst
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11 Feb 2006 - 7:42 AM

amazing

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silburkp
silburkp e2 Member 10silburkp vcard England
11 Feb 2006 - 9:54 AM

Simply excellent!

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mikesavage
mikesavage e2 Member 12260 forum postsmikesavage vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2006 - 3:01 PM

Yes, a very high-quality image indeed. Click!

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Bogwoppett
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12 Feb 2006 - 2:53 AM

thank you very much for your comments!!

steve

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azzabc
azzabc e2 Member 10185 forum postsazzabc vcard United Kingdom
15 Feb 2006 - 10:01 AM

Stunning picture. Gorgeous model. Light is cracking in my opinion!

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