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26/01/2011 - 5:39 PM
Alec On The Rocks
25/01/2009 - 10:54 PM
CC Again!!!
13/01/2009 - 9:49 PM
Thorpe bay Lasso
The trouble with the modifications on this site is that they are fiddled about with by the machine that is ePz and spewed out into some flash doodah which makes all your sharpening examples futile and pointless. On that note may I say that for me this needs selectively sharpening in some areas and easing up on the sharpening in others. Your foreground looks a bit 'smudgy' and needs a bit of a kick up the backside with a sharp boot, however looking at the mast, spars and guy line of the boat I would recommend easing the sharpening there.As for the image itself it doesn't really do a lot for me except for the fact that it shows a certain level of competency.
The colours are very pretty though...and the tones of course.
09/12/2008 - 11:48 PM
Big Ben at night
18/11/2008 - 7:50 PM
Bleamoss Beck
The foliage at the top frames it a little for me but it doesn't half show up the CA...unless you introduced it through trying to darken the area during post production?Colours seem a bit on the strong side too and it really needed a bit of sky rather than the expanse of grey.
I like the composition though.
19/08/2008 - 11:47 PM
Dusk at Roaches
You're shooting into the sun and you're expecting the viewer to believe that there is so much mid-tone light in your foreground when after years of experience the mind tells you that this is wrong unless there is light from another source which is patently not evident. That is what feels wrong to me.
06/06/2008 - 11:28 PM
Bad Day

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For some strange reason, I really like this one...
Don't fight it. Love is something that should be embraced rather than defied.
Brush work needs looking at, as it appears to impinge on the jaw line which looks amateurish at best. Specular highlights in the hair are distracting and in a commercial environment would be removed.
However, as you say, it's just a bit of fun (which photography, in my mind, should always be) and so such critique is irrelevant.
A good fun picture.
09/05/2008 - 7:04 AM
River
Looks a little underexposed to me. The image is there and compositionally it works. The twig in the LH corner is a little distracting.Next time don't stop down so much, try f16 where your lens will be sharper and try to get the exposure so that the histogram is pushed up to but not over the right hand side.
I've added a mod to try and illustrate what I mean.
11/04/2008 - 8:29 PM
Higher GreenCoal Mine
28/12/2007 - 12:08 AM
S A I L T O M E
At last, someone asks the relevant question.Why do you think Homer begins the work by having Zeus discuss Aegisthus' murder? Is he planting the idea of the unfaithful wife waylaying her husband, since Aegisthus had just been killed by the son of Agamemnon?
Your use of Sail To Me as one word also intrigues me. Are you reflecting Homer's rejection of normal prose of the time within the appellative style of your picture?












