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this was take at hunstanton england, it was getting dark, i tried a 10 stop nd filter and the exposure was about 7 minutes,

Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:22 Feb 2013 - 4:45 PM
Focal Length:10mm
Aperture:f/20.0
Shutter Speed:30sec
ISO:100
Title:IMPENDING STORM
Username:brian7d brian7d
Uploaded:8 Oct 2013 - 11:02 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7395 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom971 Constructive Critique Points
8 Oct 2013 - 11:34 AM

It's an intriguing composition, the lines zig-zagging towards the horizon. I think I might prefer a lower viewpoint, which would leave less of a gap between the end of the groynes and the horizon, but the vertical of the beacon post reaching up into the sky compensates to some extent. I'm seeing a slight dark halo up and down the sides of the post, though.
My main problem - while the smoothness in the water and the clouds works, I want more texture and detail in the timbers as a firm anchor for the eye.
Moira

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
8 Oct 2013 - 7:35 PM

Mixed feelings. It has a fine composition and significant impact. The long exposure has resulted in more movement than just sky and water with everything a little soft. Would prefer the solid objects sharp.

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