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Taken in old Havana.

Simon.

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:The Way
Username:BURNBLUE BURNBLUE
Uploaded:4 Jul 2012 - 8:51 AM
Tags:Cuba, Landscape / travel
Votes:38

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fraser
fraser  10631 forum posts Scotland14 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 9:09 AM

The pressure's on after your PM last night Simon!Wink

I really like this and I think it would mke a superb tighter crop too, focusing on the subject and less on the environment. I'm not suggesting it would be better but I think it would make a good alternative. Her peace and calm (and beauty) in such an environment makes a strong statement. Maybe that's why you included the figures in the top left.

Fraser

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BURNBLUE
BURNBLUE e2 Member 8BURNBLUE vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 9:27 AM

Thanks Fraser , got some with tighter crop but wanted to show the whole wider picture and her in relation to it. But good comment.

Regards Simon.

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Leilani
Leilani  929 forum posts England3 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 10:00 AM

Powerful image. Nice one! Smile

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England207 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 10:55 AM

Good to see the overall location and that is a wonderful stair case shape.
Well set up and captured here Simon
Regards Richard

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carmenfuchs
4 Jul 2012 - 12:45 PM

a tighter crop would kill this for me. it's sublime. looks like a still from a movie. fascinating work you do, si. =)

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UrbaneMagick
4 Jul 2012 - 12:55 PM

can;t fault your work Simon, always excited when I know you've uploaded...never disappointed.

Gareth

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lifesnapper
lifesnapper e2 Member 8lifesnapper vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 7:58 PM

Wonderful comp' Si, and I love the little picture going on in the BG Smile

John Smile

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scrimmy
scrimmy e2 Member 5364 forum postsscrimmy vcard Scotland5 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 8:34 PM

super stuff again....my own personal preference would be to lose the figures at the top, while retaining the the shape of the staircase...but after reading previous comments maybe looking at the "wider picture" would benefit my own photography.....

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LynneJoyce
LynneJoyce e2 Member 6LynneJoyce vcard United Kingdom97 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 11:09 PM

I'd lose the figures too and that flash of turquoise behind them, probably by cloning, but I wouldntvwnt o lose the background and the context that it gives. Just goes to show that we all have different ideas.

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Sezz
Sezz e2 Member 9617 forum postsSezz vcard England15 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jul 2012 - 11:01 AM

Just look at those stairs!! I agree would work well without the figures but I also like as is shown in context with the surroundings.

Sarah *

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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 5Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2012 - 1:50 PM

I like the feel of walking around in this shot. That staircase looks like it could fall down. So much to see, love the people above, seems hot and people are looking for a breath of cool air......Sandy

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