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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 1000D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:8 Feb 2012 - 11:09 AM
Focal Length:225mm
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:-2/3
ISO:250
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:RED
Username:caisiimao caisiimao
Uploaded:11 Feb 2012 - 9:12 AM
Tags:Flowers & plants, Red
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mhfore
mhfore e2 Member 7mhfore vcard England176 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 9:24 AM

Hi Caisii,
I love this type of image it would make a good minimalist canvas but in my opinion only would work better in a portrait mode. In the mod I have set it on a pure black background and reduced the vibrantcy to reflect the time of year.

Nice shot Caisii. Smile

Martin

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8831 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 9:33 PM

You have chosen a nice colourful bit of foliage, have isolated it nicely, and kept a clean background.
I think there are several presentation possibilities with this, Caisii, and so I have done a modification with an idea of my own.
I placed the twig so that it emanates from the top right corner and gave it plenty of space beneath. There was strong light at the time of shooting, which has burnt out some parts of the colourful leaves, so I gave those spots a bit of colour. I adjusted levels until I was happy with the contrast, then burned a few bright spots in the background and softened it.
Pamela.

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paulbroad
paulbroad e2 Member 789 forum postspaulbroad vcard United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 9:48 PM

And I would right crop to put it near the right side of the frame. Just shows how many different possibilities there are! You have done a fine technical job here.

Paul

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