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Partial view of Kohima World War II cemetery is seen on a clear day at Kohima, the capital city of India’s north eastern state of Nagaland. There are about 1378 headstones of the fallen Allied soldiers at the Kohima War cemetery which commerates the Battle of Kohima, a critical battle of the Burma Campaign in World War II. The famous battle of Kohima which fought around the Indian eastern state capital Kohima from 04 April-22 June 1944, marks the limits of Japanese advance to India in 1944 was described as the 'Stalingrad of the East'.

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Camera:Nikon D60 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:28 May 2011 - 10:29 AM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:-2/3
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:world war II cemetery
Username:caisiimao caisiimao
Uploaded:3 Jun 2011 - 4:45 PM
Tags:Cemetery, General
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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4211 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom129 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jun 2011 - 8:48 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Interesting picture and narrative. I like the symetrical composition which suits the solemn subject.
Some people might like a little more brightness and maybe colour satuation but I like it as it is.
Regards
Ian

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I agree with all of that Ian.

The only change I'd make would be to crop the top to just above the trees. It's not a "thirds" thing, you know by now that I'm not bothered by all that kind of nonsense, I just think it looks better with a bit less sky.

Just my opinion of course.

Bren.

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Quote: I know you better than to mean that RoT is nonsense Bren.

I think you'd be wrong Frank!

I don't really have much truck with any of the perceived rules of composition.
I agree thst the RoT has its uses but it's not something that I apply with any vigour in my own work and I don't very often suggest that others do. Likwise, I'm not concerned with converging verticals most of the time and I'm not bothered if a person is looking/walking out of a shot, or if they're facing left or right.
If an image looks OK (to me), despite being full of preconceived "faults," I'll leave it alone.
I suppose the closest I get to applying a rule is that I prefer to see level horizons. And even that can be open to interpretation where several lines might be crossing a shot.

Bren.

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Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jun 2011 - 12:57 AM

I love the way you've exploited the exact symmetry of the scene, and I think for that reason also the sky should stay the way it is so the tip of the cross is in the exact centre - it's one of those instances where rule of thirds doesn't need to apply.

I also think the cloud top left balances the rest of the cloudy area on the right - it's important IMO that there's balanced composition in the sky itself.

I've done a mod where I applied acurve just to bring out some of the detail in the shadow areas - hope that's some help

Stephen

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Quote: crop the top to just above the trees.

I'll withdraw that suggestion.
When I said that I wasn't able to see the smalller version (because of some issues that were taking place on here and with Virgin Media) of the image and I thought that what was on my monitor was the whole thing.
Now I've seen it all, I eralise I was wrong and agree with what Stephen has said er. the composition with the crioss at the center.
My apologies.

Bren.

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