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Messing about with off camera flash, added a textured bg and a bleach bypass in Colour Efex.
Sorry to those who voted before...but I prefer this one.
Really interesting study.
V2 for me - much better.
Thanks James, I posted that one first and changed it for this one....
Good portrait I think V1 as V2 has a yellow cast to it, good work
v2 is overall too yellow-ish I think. the color palette just feels more right in v1. the vignetting adds to it as well, although in the right bottom corner it takes away a bit too much detail (arm and table become one, at least on my screen) and brings out that bright outline around the pullover (even more). So that area needs a bit more work I think. Just to keep you busy
Beautiful portrait...v2 for me.
Thanks Koen.......I'll upload a version ......later.
OK...V3 has hopefully rectified the dark corner and sharpening halo...
i like no 3 best
looks much better in that area. I do prefer the slightly brighter and more sparkling blue of v1 (vs v3) though. but hey ho
V4 with blue jumper just for you Koen
Like the light and good details in the face and hair. The textures work well too.
A couple of points for me, the placement of the hands with the wide angle lens has made them look large in the image and they tend to draw the eye away from the face. I would crop this ( to just under the arms pits) to take the hands out, as it made a good head shot.
A she is looking a long the line of the nose and it is therefore a more reflective portrait I would have been tempted to move her slightly to the RHS to just give a little more space to left and give a stronger comp as she is quite central at the moment.
Thanks Richard......yes the hands do look larger.
Relaxed model, excellent character study to Cathy. Ron.
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