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I bought some strawberries yesterday specifically for a still life pic but what I had planned hasn't come out as well as I'd like. I'll try again tomorrow but here's another iffy one for now Smile

I've already eaten some of them but there's enough left to try again!

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony Alpha SLT-A65
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:26 May 2013 - 5:49 PM
Focal Length:45mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.6
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/6sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Strawberries.....
Username:cattyal cattyal
Uploaded:26 May 2013 - 9:57 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Fruit, General, Still life, Strawberry, Texture layer, Topaz adjust
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derekhansen
derekhansen e2 Member 5168 forum postsderekhansen vcard United Kingdom19 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2013 - 6:47 AM

Your lighting backgrounds and processing look superb and on the whole your arrangement/composition looks good. The only element that doesn't work for me is the fork. Somehow the angle interrupts the flow.
Derek

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cattyal
cattyal e2 Member 85793 forum postscattyal vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2013 - 8:58 AM

Thanks folks Smile

Happily the light at the moment is just right to do the pics just from window light and a bit of modification with my trusty sheet of foamboard. I just couldn't really crack the composition of any of my attempts yesterday - I'll try again later Smile

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kaybee
kaybee  93695 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2013 - 9:14 AM

Where's the cream?

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cattyal
cattyal e2 Member 85793 forum postscattyal vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2013 - 9:24 AM


Quote: Where's the cream?

I don't like cream Smile

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Joline
Joline e2 Member 7Joline vcard United States51 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2013 - 11:42 AM

I like the arrangement overall, but it is a bit too dark....just a teensy bit more light would work wonders. I would also like to see it without the fork.

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Alda
Alda  146 forum posts United Kingdom27 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2013 - 1:47 PM

I kinda like the fork GrinGrin

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cattyal
cattyal e2 Member 85793 forum postscattyal vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2013 - 3:32 PM

Thanks folks and thanks Alda for the mod - yep, mine is definitely too dark Smile

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 3Irishkate vcard United Kingdom71 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2013 - 4:18 PM

On the whole a very pleasing composition
but I know how hard it is to get what is in your head!
The brighter mod is lovely but I kind of liked the very controlled darker version too.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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