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sunset in weston super mare

Camera:Nikon D70 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:weston sunset
Username:Chaska Chaska
Uploaded:5 Mar 2010 - 10:21 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 9708 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2668 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 12:18 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Its not a bad shot, - colours are very nice.

Try to compose so that the horizon in not in the centre, - aboiut 1/3 up from the bottom, or down from the top depending on if you want more sky or more foreground.


Ive loaded a mod with the morizon closer to a third, nit quite there, added a little contrast and noise reduction.


Hope you find this helpful,



Regards



Willie

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sdb
sdb  6106 forum posts United Kingdom
6 Mar 2010 - 7:04 AM

I agree with the above comments - exposure has been handled well but the composition is too "central".

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 5:52 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

You have been heavily influenced by the dramatic sunset and not thought about composition. Ideally the sun itself needs to be on the left top third, then the sky darkened just a little. You then have something rather better which would be superb with the sun left where it is and a silhouetted figure on the left third top.

Paul

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