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This was a shot that I took the other day. It's only my second time using studio lighting so comments and critique are welcome.

Camera:Centon K100
Title:studio shot
Username:chelle chelle
Uploaded:10 Mar 2007 - 8:10 PM
Tags:Flash / lighting, Portraits / people, Studio
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Paul Morgan
Paul Morgan e2 Member 1315152 forum postsPaul Morgan vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
11 Mar 2007 - 1:34 AM

A good attempt Michelle, the playfulness works pretty well.

I`m not to sure where you positioned your lights, but the chap on the left could do with a little more light. There are sevaral ways to light this that would work well, you could try this.

I would have the main light at 45% and to the left of the girl at head and shoulder height. The second light at 45% and low on the rhs, angled to throw a little more light behind the girl and into the eyes and lower part of the face of the chap. Give this second light 30/50% less power.

Paul

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chelle  877 forum posts
18 Mar 2007 - 1:56 PM

Thanks for the advice Paul 8->

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