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Portovenere, Italy
August, 2008

a bride walking down the narrow streets of the village after her marriage.

Title:WhereAreYouGoing?
Username:ChiaraSA ChiaraSA
Uploaded:15 Oct 2008 - 11:59 AM
Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Tags:Balck, Black & white, Life, People, Photo journalism, Portraits / people, Street, White
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conrad
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15 Oct 2008 - 12:30 PM
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Well spotted (strange, btw, that she would be walking there alone, after just having been married).

But it doesn't look like there's anything sharp in the picture. Or was that deliberate, and were you just going for an atmospheric shot?

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ChiaraSA
15 Oct 2008 - 6:06 PM
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Yes, it was deliberate I just wanted to catch the movement, I was not sure if it worked or not until I saw the image on my pc.The aim was to give a sensation of movement, not of a figure just staying still.
thanks for your comment.

conrad
conrad (e2 Member)
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15 Oct 2008 - 8:17 PM
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I see. Well, if that was your intention, I think I would have been inclined to exaggerate it slightly and use a slightly longer shutter speed, making the movement more obvious. But still a nice idea and a good setting.

pennyspike
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16 Oct 2008 - 9:28 AM
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Welcome to epz Chiara.
You have created an air of mystery but as Conrad said because nothing at all is sharp it doesn't quite come offand a longer shutter speed would have been better.

I find the baskets in the bottom left a little distracting, if she was just walking towards those dark figures I think it would have worked much better.

I like the way you have darkened the edges of the image and everything being a contrast to the white dress of the bride.

When I look closely I'm not sure whether there is a figure just in front of her, possibly the groom walking just ahead of her. If so it does give a different impression and I think I would have tried to lose it by just darkening the area that could be the side of a face just in front of hers.

It is never easy to do these grab shots because nothing is arranged for us and the clutter of daily life is everywhere. I think it was a good try to do something very different from the usual bride shots.
Penny

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ugly
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United Kingdom35 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2008 - 11:45 AM
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Where has he gone...
There a story in there.....
Well seen ..... well taken....
Dave

Andrew_Hurley
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17 Oct 2008 - 5:52 PM
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May I take this opportunity to welcome you to the wonderful and amazing world of ephotozine. Without doubt the best photographic website in the world, well in Europe anyway, I mean in the UK, ok in England then! I'm sure you will become addicted and a day will not pass by until you have had your daily fix!

An interesting picture, I have the feeling this was just a grab shot and that the longer shutter speed was deliberate. It certainly evokes an atmosphere and asks lots of questions. For your third upload this is quite a brave choice.

Enjoy ephotozine and enjoy your photography. I look forward to seeing some of your monochrome urban images on this site.

Ciao for now!

Andrew
PS Just in case you are feeling homesick link

Last Modified By Andrew_Hurley at 17 Oct 2008 - 5:55 PM
Tooth
Tooth (Critique Team)
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18 Oct 2008 - 9:57 PM
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Hi and welcome to EPZ< stick around and enjoy...

think this was nicely seen, but doesn't quite work, mainly because of the points outlined above, but mainly I think because the bride is exactly in the middle of the pic. This tends to add to a sense of ststic-ness which goes against the feel of motion, of her walking away from the viewer. It's hard to tell if she's just standing still or moving, so I think overall a nice attempt thsat doesn't quite work

Keep them coming

Stephen

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