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Portovenere, Italy
August, 2008
a bride walking down the narrow streets of the village after her marriage.
| Title: | WhereAreYouGoing? |
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| Uploaded: | 15 Oct 2008 - 11:59 AM |
| Camera: | Canon EOS 400D |
| Lens: | 18-55 |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Tags: | Balck, Black & white, Life, People, Photo journalism, Portraits / people, Street, White |
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Welcome to epz Chiara.
You have created an air of mystery but as Conrad said because nothing at all is sharp it doesn't quite come offand a longer shutter speed would have been better.
I find the baskets in the bottom left a little distracting, if she was just walking towards those dark figures I think it would have worked much better.
I like the way you have darkened the edges of the image and everything being a contrast to the white dress of the bride.
When I look closely I'm not sure whether there is a figure just in front of her, possibly the groom walking just ahead of her. If so it does give a different impression and I think I would have tried to lose it by just darkening the area that could be the side of a face just in front of hers.
It is never easy to do these grab shots because nothing is arranged for us and the clutter of daily life is everywhere. I think it was a good try to do something very different from the usual bride shots.
Penny

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An interesting picture, I have the feeling this was just a grab shot and that the longer shutter speed was deliberate. It certainly evokes an atmosphere and asks lots of questions. For your third upload this is quite a brave choice.
Enjoy ephotozine and enjoy your photography. I look forward to seeing some of your monochrome urban images on this site.
Ciao for now!
Andrew
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Hi and welcome to EPZ< stick around and enjoy...
think this was nicely seen, but doesn't quite work, mainly because of the points outlined above, but mainly I think because the bride is exactly in the middle of the pic. This tends to add to a sense of ststic-ness which goes against the feel of motion, of her walking away from the viewer. It's hard to tell if she's just standing still or moving, so I think overall a nice attempt thsat doesn't quite work
Keep them coming
Stephen
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