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04/07/2011 - 12:26 PM
The seamstress
It's really good and gets my vote, I hope you don't mind me saying but I think it would be better if you could alter it a little so that the window looks straighter. If you have a recent version of Photoshop it's easily done with the lens distortion correction tool.
04/07/2011 - 12:18 PM
Lone Worker
It's great. I think it would have been better had the focal point (which for me is the guy) was more off-centre. I'd have liked to see him on the left of the frame with where he's going to go next all to the right. If you watch a film of someone walking down the street they'll usually frame the person in that way, our brains "prefer" to see what's coming rather than what's been. The exposure and processing is pretty faultless.
22/02/2009 - 12:32 AM
Cool dude (C wanted M welcome)
Sarah you've asked for critique and I'm glad because after looking through your uploads to date something struck me about the composition. On each photo the subject's nose is dead centre (or not far of) of the image. Imagine a cross on the image and you'll see what I mean. But not on jump for joy, and that's why it's a better image. Try shooting with your subject off centre.
You can rescue this one a bit by doing what CB says, but you should shoot it like that to start with really.
It's sharp and punchy, well exposed.
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