If you could have taken a couple of paces to your left, then composed the foreground rock more to the right as Dougie says you would have had more of a diagonal between the foreground and middle ground. Conversion looks good, dodging and burning would add more drama to the image. I would use a soft brush dodging highlights about 6-7% strength and burning the shadows again about 6-7%. Work on a seperate layer then you can turn it on and off to see the effects, also easy delete if your not happy.


Hope that helps,

Chris