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Username:chrish4 chrish4
Uploaded:6 Oct 2005 - 6:12 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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answersonapostcard Site Moderator 1012601 forum postsanswersonapostcard vcard United Kingdom15 Constructive Critique Points
6 Oct 2005 - 6:15 AM

I can see why you are booked until Christmas, bet parents love these. My only niggle and it is a just a little one is that I'd prefer it if she were looking more at the camera, her focus seems to be slightly off, at something at the side (mum?). Angelic looking child, look forward to seeing more of your work Smile K.

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chrish4
chrish4  889 forum posts
6 Oct 2005 - 6:24 AM

Thanks K - I do have a straight on look photo, similar pose which I will post some time, this one I liked a little glint in her eye as though she was thinking about something, but maybe that is more distracting. I really appreciate your comments - I think your own photos are amazing, can't imagine being able to do that in a thousand years!! p.s. re being booked to christmas - that sounds big headed was only trying to see off my critics - omitted to say only work 2 days per week so not such a mean feat to be booked that far in advance as it may sound!!

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firzhugh
firzhugh  9 New Zealand
6 Oct 2005 - 7:01 AM

beautiful pose and tones. very nice portrait

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heatherb
heatherb  10 United Kingdom
6 Oct 2005 - 7:36 AM

cherub like looks like she has wings
heather

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jeffa
jeffa  932 forum posts United Kingdom
6 Oct 2005 - 8:18 AM

Your title says it all. A lovley portrait
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Jeff

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vparmar
vparmar  9 United Kingdom
6 Oct 2005 - 8:29 AM

lovely pose and tones
vinny

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davidentrican
6 Oct 2005 - 8:36 AM

Agree that it would have more impact if she was looking at the camera and perhaps getting down to her level a bit more, but otherwise this is a great shot. Well done.

Cheers, Dave

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mikesmith e2 Member 1045 forum postsmikesmith vcard United Kingdom35 Constructive Critique Points
6 Oct 2005 - 10:43 AM

Delightful portrait
Mike

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brandy23
brandy23  8
9 Oct 2005 - 5:25 AM

Lovely shot.
Bruce

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mikeweeks
mikeweeks  9954 forum posts England3 Constructive Critique Points
10 Oct 2005 - 2:44 AM

Chris,

like the pose on this one, but if i am a little critical it is that there are no decent highlights (catchlights) in her eyes - they look somewhat lifeless, but this may be due to the size of the image. Look at your image - seeing the light and see how much more the eyes are alive.

you seem to be able to get some good interaction with the kids - it looks like they are enjoying themselves - well done

mike

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chrish4
chrish4  889 forum posts
17 Oct 2005 - 8:40 AM

thanks all & I will take on board points re eyes - I really like this lying down pose, but due to fact I am trying to create impromptu env't without always moving lights I struggle to get catchlights at this level - moe practice required me thinks!!

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