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done last year i change it on my laptop so it look diferant

Brand:FUJIFILM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:13 Jul 2011 - 8:17 PM
Focal Length:16.8mm
Aperture:f/5.3
Shutter Speed:1/220sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:butterfly
Username:christinecilia christinecilia
Uploaded:10 Jul 2012 - 3:51 PM
Tags:Wildlife / nature
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sweetpea62
sweetpea62 e2 Member 3sweetpea62 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jul 2012 - 4:14 PM

A great shot,If it was me I would cropp it tighter and show the butterfly more..Lin

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netta1234
netta1234 e2 Member 2142 forum postsnetta1234 vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jul 2012 - 6:54 PM

BeautifulSmile
Netta

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PaulLiley
PaulLiley  5 United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jul 2012 - 10:17 PM

Excellent shot of a comma. Paul

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jul 2012 - 11:45 AM

Comma butterfly on some bright foliage almost loses your subject matter. I think this would have been much better closer up, in sharp focus (it is quite unsharp) and with a square crop. Had you waited for it to open its wings wider you would have had a better shot still.

Compositionally I feel that because of the body language of the Comma, facing right, it needed to be in the lower left hand side, looking up. As it is your LHS is virtually redundant. I have uploaded a mod to show you how I would like to see it.

Looking at EXIF the chosen aperture of f5.3 is insufficient to get sharp focus here so perhaps f8 of f11 with either a very steady hand or a tripod. One other option available to you was to raise your ISO.

There are other shots around of Comma butterflies, (see Page 5 of my portfolio for one) so you can make comparisons.

I hope you find this useful.

Frank

Last Modified By Focus_Man at 11 Jul 2012 - 11:47 AM

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Tibetan
Tibetan  2 England
11 Jul 2012 - 2:20 PM

Nice one it's all a matter of taste! and insects do not perform on demand you get the shot before it's gone! nice one like it from me, regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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ValeryAst
ValeryAst  2 Russian Federation
19 Jul 2012 - 5:17 PM

Stunning colors and a very interesting frame as well!Smile

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christinecilia
christinecilia e2 Member 2christinecilia vcard England
22 Jul 2012 - 3:42 PM

yes yaleryast i like how you have crop it like it :Grin

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Chinga
Chinga e2 Member 3Chinga vcard United Kingdom
24 Aug 2012 - 1:42 PM

Lovely shot! They are not easy to photograph as they don't stand still for long. Nice light as well. IB

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kazza12
kazza12  1 United Kingdom
22 Sep 2012 - 12:49 PM

beautiful shot GrinGrinGrinGrin

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