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@50, f/9, 1/20 shutter, iso 100, a new processing method,


any kinds of comments and critiques are very much welcome, whether it looks good or not, can you share your opinion...

Camera:Canon EOS 500D
Lens:Canon 50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:THE HAWKER
Username:clicknimagine clicknimagine
Uploaded:13 Jun 2010 - 1:17 PM
Tags:Face, Fashion, Hawker, India, Photo journalism, Portrait, Portraits / people, Street photography, Street portrait, Wedding / social
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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 8147 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece18 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 1:36 PM

An excellent image, well cropped and presented. Carol

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QuinnyA
QuinnyA e2 Member 5QuinnyA vcard Australia59 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 1:49 PM

Sorry - not really happening for me - too central on the eyes and far too much of the head gear - I know what you are trying to portray but if the carrier of goods was the object them you needed a much higher camera angle all that a side!! - a bit of a twist, a crop and a bit of details enhancement and WOW nice image, - Cheers Andy

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Jonny_Darko
Jonny_Darko e2 Member 4Jonny_Darko vcard 1 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 1:51 PM

I like the desaturated look.

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clicknimagine
clicknimagine e2 Member 5221 forum postsclicknimagine vcard 88 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 1:54 PM

Thanks Carol/Andy/smiler, thanks a lot friends, what you are trying to say Andy, i have that version too, and it is not cropped Carol, but i am trying to know your opinion about the processing, honestly, where it is to improve...

Last Modified By clicknimagine at 13 Jun 2010 - 1:55 PM

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QuinnyA
QuinnyA e2 Member 5QuinnyA vcard Australia59 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 2:24 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Rahul, what did Carol say about processing? - Lost me!! - my comment was simply about the composition which I did not find great, as this image stands, I can see the intention of the image as you took it but for me it does not work sorry if we offended you - Andy

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 8529 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1094 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 3:28 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

The composition works reasonably well for me, but not one of your strongest. I'd like a slice cropped off from the right side - I find both the ear and the bit of rope bottom right quite distracting.
Re the processing, it's an effect that I like generally but I think I'd prefer this as straight b&w. Here the top and bottom of the frame seem detached from each other, the 50/50 vertical split would work better for me without the distraction of colour.
Moira

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clicknimagine
clicknimagine e2 Member 5221 forum postsclicknimagine vcard 88 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 4:26 PM

Thanks Andy/Moira, NO ANDY, YOUR COMMENT HAS NEVER OFFENDED ME, please do not think it otherwise, all your opinions are helpful in the way to develop my works...

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Roly
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13 Jun 2010 - 8:23 PM

Interesting shot Rahul and well processed.

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Ray42
Ray42 e2 Member 6Ray42 vcard England3 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jun 2010 - 7:09 AM

An interesting shot

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NobbytheNobster
14 Jun 2010 - 12:18 PM

I love this shot.
Well taken.
Ricky.

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clicknimagine
clicknimagine e2 Member 5221 forum postsclicknimagine vcard 88 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jun 2010 - 7:23 PM

thanks Roly/Ray/Ricky, thanks a lot friends...

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Petro_Conradie
Petro_Conradie e2 Member 5Petro_Conradie vcard South Africa
14 Jun 2010 - 8:36 PM

Definitely one of my fav's, really very well done, excellent 'clear' image...you really captured the 'soul'
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clicknimagine
clicknimagine e2 Member 5221 forum postsclicknimagine vcard 88 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jun 2010 - 8:40 PM

thanks a lot Petro for the UA, it is really very much appreciated...

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