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very much an image in the making, not sure where im going with this one yet but im sure i will come up with some more ideas.
hope you like it, mods,comments and critique welcome.

Camera:n/a
Lens:n/a
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Lonely Places
Username:clintnewsham clintnewsham
Uploaded:26 May 2010 - 9:52 PM
Tags:Bulb, Digital art, Digitally manipulated, Fish, General
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rockfish
rockfish  4 United Kingdom
26 May 2010 - 9:59 PM

Great image. I wouldn't develop it too much if I were you. I think the simplicity of this is a strong point. Nice work.
Peter

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chase
chase Critique Team 91118 forum postschase vcard England240 Constructive Critique Points
26 May 2010 - 10:50 PM

I would tend to agree with Peter above Clint,maybe try to get rid of some of the highlights but I like the gentle colours of this.
That fish looks a tad 'down in the mouth' though Wink

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Metalhead
Metalhead  61866 forum posts England2 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2010 - 12:12 AM

Can I be honest? The angles don't quite work here. The concept is brilliant, and the digital manipulation work is spot on, but the horizontal water line doesn't tie in with the angle the bulb is sitting on the desk/surface.

We're looking from an oblique angle down on to the bulb, so the water filling the bulb, for ultimate realism, should also be at an oblique angle. Don't ask me how to get that effect! I haven't got a clue! Maybe shoot a circular goldfish bowl from the same oblique angle with the water full to the brim. That might go some way to marrying together the two images.

All in all a great idea though.

Chris

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pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly e2 Member 8283 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2010 - 7:57 AM

great idea but I can see where Chris is coming from with the comment on the water level - I like it but what do I know

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Ray42
Ray42  6 England3 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2010 - 8:46 AM

Great idea - an interesting concept - looking forward to its progression

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Johnfromnotts
27 May 2010 - 10:17 AM

Well planned and cunningly executed!
John

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Oliverpants e2 Member 5Oliverpants vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2010 - 11:43 AM

I find all the comments really interesting and have got my mind working I look forward to the next edition. I love the simplicity of the shot. Ann

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ironman
ironman  5
27 May 2010 - 6:12 PM

This works for me.

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zanzibarwinds
28 May 2010 - 11:03 AM

Definately gets my vote, very creative work Clint, nice job.

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