I sometimes wonder on the comments made against some photographs posted. I thought this was an opportunity to showcase your work and seek thoughtful opinion or guidance,
The model is indeed an attractive woman yet has not been captured here in any other way than can be described as a snap photo. It looks to me like a camera club free for all or those moments at motor shows where a model appears and a 100 cameras suddenly are whisked out and a mad frenzy of snapping goes on.
No thought to lighting/pose/camera angle here. Other than the sharpness, exposure and model there is nothing going for this for me.
Looking at your folio there are a number of good and thoughtful images posted. You can do bettter and I do not know what comments you are seeking from posting this image.
Sorry if it sounds like a bit of a rant or blunt but I do not find it helpful when very average photographs are commented on as a good shot/great photo etc. other than to add encouragement.
If this model is available to you I suggest trying again and giving thought to background, lighting, pose and camera angle. Beautiful girl - do her justice - with a beautiful image.