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This is something I'm working on. Would be interested to have your comments...

Camera:Mamiya Rz 67
Lens:90mm
Recording media:Fuji Reala
Title:Untitled
Username:contemporary dave contemporary dave
Uploaded:14 Mar 2006 - 8:53 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Hot_Fuzz
Hot_Fuzz  9121 forum posts
14 Mar 2006 - 8:54 AM

Great shot and model!

DAve.

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fraser
fraser  10631 forum posts Scotland14 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2006 - 8:59 AM

Love the attitude and composition. Very dynamic.

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beavis
beavis  8 Ireland
14 Mar 2006 - 9:07 AM

Nice shot, nice lighting and nice model...

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hannnahhh
hannnahhh  8
14 Mar 2006 - 9:09 AM

very interesting, i like the crop, there feels like there's something that's almost there but not quite.. but i cant say what it is!! sorry to be no help, it's brilliant, well done

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fauxtography
14 Mar 2006 - 9:39 AM

An intersting shot indeed! great tones and lighting plus a very dynamic pose.

I'd be inclined to agree with Hannah, about something not being quite right, i think it may be the tight cropping on her head, i'd prefer either more of her head or much less, maybe cropping out the eyes completely.

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chris_g
chris_g  8
14 Mar 2006 - 10:30 AM

Great crop, great expression, great shot.

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Photogene
Photogene  8176 forum posts Wales
14 Mar 2006 - 11:43 AM

Great portrait with attitude

Richard

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wiktorg
wiktorg  8
14 Mar 2006 - 12:03 PM

Great expression, crop, lighting and pose.
Like it a lot.
Wiktor

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Nic_WA
Nic_WA  9179 forum posts Australia2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2006 - 6:23 PM

Dynamic image - like the composition very much.
Nic

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christabella
christabella e2 Member 10133 forum postschristabella vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Mar 2006 - 8:55 PM

great strong image, would it improve if the model wasnt as central and included all of arm? Like the lighting and tone.
christine

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pcheywood
pcheywood  81300 forum posts England
15 Mar 2006 - 12:05 AM

Just a fabulous image, is it inspired by any Grace Jones shots ??

Paul.

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55jase
55jase e2 Member 8186 forum posts55jase vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2006 - 1:19 AM

love the expression and the pose.good use of light
jase

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Ian_D
Ian_D  9
15 Mar 2006 - 1:29 AM

Dynamic and vibrant - makes a change from the usual. I like the crop on the face as well.

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MediumSizeUnavailable

Now this is a cool shot. Love it

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claret
claret  949 forum posts England
15 Mar 2006 - 11:12 PM

Striking shot.
Iain

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clevercloggs
29 Mar 2006 - 5:42 PM

As it is a work in progress, have you thought about just concentrating on the upper torso? It seems that is where the it all happens.
With this in mind I would reduce the bottom half to just below the chest. Only problem is that the size of the image then is such an odd one. Like the rest, colouring etc. click

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gabb2001
gabb2001  9
13 Apr 2006 - 1:00 AM

this is awesome, great crop, beautiful tones!

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kaybee
kaybee  93703 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2006 - 1:02 AM

VERY dynamic

Have a Readers Choice!

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paulcr
paulcr  91536 forum posts Ireland9 Constructive Critique Points
25 Oct 2006 - 3:26 PM

Love this, great lines and expression. Paul

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