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jake ,my grandson on his favourite slide. took vibrance right down and boosted the blacks. first time i have altered an image.

Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-135
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:on his slide
Username:dacko dacko
Uploaded:9 Dec 2008 - 7:03 PM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139385 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
10 Dec 2008 - 12:50 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A good capture of Jake. Perhaps he is a little too central in the photo - cropping from the right could help here. Also the photo may need a little brightening up particularly in the mid-tones. I've uploaded a mod for your consideration.

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dacko
dacko  6 United Kingdom
10 Dec 2008 - 12:56 PM

can see the difference straight away.cropping also brings the attention back to jake. thankyou for your comments.

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pamelajean Critique Team 8748 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1575 Constructive Critique Points
10 Dec 2008 - 5:10 PM

A charming natural image and a cheeky grin. I like the way you have framed Jake within the frame of the slide. The conversion works well and I'm glad you had a go at editing the image, this is the only way to learn, and can be very satisfying when you get it right.

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dacko
dacko  6 United Kingdom
11 Dec 2008 - 4:21 PM

thankyou for yor comments,I will post the original .

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