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Taken during a recent visit to Aidan's home in Bantry Bay, Ireland. I have used Aperture 3 to edit the image and have kept it fairly simple by using the present B&W with red filter and then the Toy cross-process tool.

Please let me know your comments so I can improve my photography...much appreciated.

Thanks,

David

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A350
Lens:Minolta/Sony AF DT 18-70mm F3.5-5.6 (D)
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:10 Oct 2011 - 1:00 PM
Focal Length:45mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.6
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/800sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Emma & Aidan 1
Username:David_Lamb David_Lamb
Uploaded:18 Nov 2011 - 5:45 PM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2798 Constructive Critique Points
18 Nov 2011 - 7:14 PM

I like the shot, and mono suits it. Im not familiar with Aperture, so dont know if the effects you wanted turned out as planned.

Theres a couple of comments I can make. The composition would look better with 1/3 ground and 2/3 sky. which means cropping space from the top; there are a number of marks or smudges in the sky which I take to be either dirt on the lens or sensor, - easily cleaned up; and I would suggest adding some more drama to the sky by increasing contrast in the sky only.

Loaded mod to show what I mean,



Hope this is helpful,



regards


Willie

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