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Taken during a recent visit to Aidan's home in Bantry Bay, Ireland. I have used Aperture 3 to edit the image and have kept it fairly simple by using the present B&W with red filter and then the Toy cross-process tool.
Please let me know your comments so I can improve my photography...much appreciated.
Thanks,
David
| Brand: | Sony |
| Camera: | Sony A350 |
| Lens: | Minolta/Sony AF DT 18-70mm F3.5-5.6 (D) |
| Recording media: | RAW (digital) |
| Date Taken: | 10 Oct 2011 - 1:00 PM |
| Focal Length: | 45mm |
| Lens Max Aperture: | f/5.6 |
| Aperture: | f/5.6 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1/800sec |
| Exposure Comp: | 0.0 |
| ISO: | 100 |
| Exposure Mode: | Manual |
| Metering Mode: | Multi-segment |
| Flash: | Off, Did not fire |
| Title: | Emma & Aidan 1 |
| Username: | 
David_Lamb |
| Uploaded: | 18 Nov 2011 - 5:45 PM |
| Tags: | Black & white, Portraits / people |
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I like the shot, and mono suits it. Im not familiar with Aperture, so dont know if the effects you wanted turned out as planned.
Theres a couple of comments I can make. The composition would look better with 1/3 ground and 2/3 sky. which means cropping space from the top; there are a number of marks or smudges in the sky which I take to be either dirt on the lens or sensor, - easily cleaned up; and I would suggest adding some more drama to the sky by increasing contrast in the sky only.
Loaded mod to show what I mean,
Hope this is helpful,
regards
Willie
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