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I am just getting into photography and would love to improve my skills.

I would like some critique/mods of my image and the processing, I use Lightroom 4.

Thanks
Dave

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:3 Jan 2013 - 1:59 PM
Focal Length:32mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Huon River boats
Username:david1810 david1810
Uploaded:1 Feb 2013 - 6:30 AM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel, Transport
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Hermanus
Hermanus  2 South Africa
1 Feb 2013 - 6:45 AM

This is a lovely photo Dave !!GrinGrin Very well taken !

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leontari
leontari e2 Member 2leontari vcard Greece
1 Feb 2013 - 7:32 AM

Superb light, brilliant colours and reflections
Effrossini

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom874 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2013 - 8:34 AM

A fine image. The colours are quite intense and possibly a little un-natural. However, the result is a strong image with a pleasing composition and well handled highlights. Not much to improve.

Paul

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
1 Feb 2013 - 9:42 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A super image and I quite like the colours which have rich depth. One thing about which you had no control at the exposure stage is the two part boats top right breaking in at the frame edge - I thought it would be a nice idea to get rid of them hence the mod which I have uploaded. I know the mooring post has gone but with care you could easily leave it in - it was a quick mod to give you the idea.

Frank

Last Modified By Focus_Man at 1 Feb 2013 - 9:43 AM

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1 Feb 2013 - 5:51 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like the vertical format, David, the way the mooring rope of the foreground boat comes down to the bottom frame, and the placing of the three boats. I think Frank's modification is just what I would have suggested, and three is a very good number for any composition. You have captured the rippled reflections well, and your colours are fine for my taste.
With the aperture you chose, you have good detail throughout.
Your exposure is good, and the lighter colours are full of detail.
The angle of shooting makes the shot more interesting and allows us to see the contents of the foreground boat.
The boats are a little tight in the frame, and you might like to consider having more water on the left side. I have added some in my modification, but still think the image could take a little more. It gives the boats a bit more breathing space, and also gives the viewer the impression of there being a lot of water all around. I wanted to straighten the gangway at the top left of the image, but the straightening removed some of the edges and it therefore needed cropping. I didn't want to crop it any tighter, and so left it as it was. Also, I didn't remove the two part boats top right, Frank has done a good job on that.
Pamela.

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david1810
david1810  2 Australia
1 Feb 2013 - 11:02 PM

Hi Frank and Pamela

thanks heaps for your comments. I noticed the 2 boats intruding into the top corner, however I don't think I can remove them using Lightroom? I intend to lean photoshop after I feel more confident with Lightroom.

Pamela - thanks for the breathing comment I can see exactly what you mean and I will return to my original and see if I can improve the image.

Thanks again, it is great to know I am heading in the right direction.

Dave

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banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2946 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2013 - 1:35 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

HI David. You can remove the upper boats in LR by using the crop tool and cropping them out.


The shot has a few small issues. It needs darker areas to be a little lighter, and bright areas to have highlights toned downl colour balance is too cold for me, and its very oversaturated, The mod Ive loaded is desaturated to - 15 in Photoshop.

Have a look and see what you think.

By the way, make sure your monitor is calibrated, - theres a free online programme called Calibrize might be useful if you dont have a Spyder or the like ( I know, not shortage of spiders in Oz)



regards


Willie

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david1810
david1810  2 Australia
2 Feb 2013 - 7:15 AM

Hi Willie

I will take your advice and have another go at processing. In Scott Kelby's lightroom book he did a chapter on a high contrast method which I used for this image. I will have another go using a more standard approach. I have not calibrated my monitor so I will investigate my options.

When you get to Oz dont worry about the spiders the snakes sharks and crocodiles are far more dangerous.

thanks again

Dave

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