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Hi I have just got into photography and hope to study formally in 2013.

Saw an image on your website and thought I would give it a try. Would love any feedback/criticism you have to offer.

Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:Canon EF 24-105mm f/4 L IS USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Safe again
Username:david1810 david1810
Uploaded:25 Jul 2012 - 12:24 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Specialist / abstract
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Angi_Wallace
Angi_Wallace e2 Member 6172 forum postsAngi_Wallace vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2012 - 12:38 AM

Lovely arty image, Ive not tried this style before, but do like it a lot

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2012 - 9:20 AM

Welcome to EPZ David, as you are new to the site, a self confessed beginner and this is your first upload I am unfamiliar with your work genre, hence the comments below.

Doesn't work for me I am afraid, it seems like an out of focus, slanting picture of yachts.

The main reason it doesn't work is that I find myself attempting to see through the hazy lines to ascertain just what it is. An arty abstract, I feel, shouldn't have that effect, it should be able to stand alone.

That therefore begs the question, is it an error or deliberate?

Enjoy your time with us and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Frank

Last Modified By Focus_Man at 25 Jul 2012 - 9:23 AM

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banehawi Critique Team 10822 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2821 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2012 - 2:15 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Welcome to EPZ David.


I like this style, however this will work a lot better when the image is level, rather than tilted. Its an impression of boats in a harbour thats quite nice, minimalistic, and could make a very nice print.


If you take a look at the mod Ive loaded under the modifications tab up the page, the mod is level, colour an vibrancy is increased, the height is stretched a little, and a small amount of sharpening and contrast has been applied.
A good start to image manipulation.


Hope this helps, and enjoy the site.

heres some information for new members:

Please load you exif data, or shot settings. We need aperture, speed, iso, lens, focal length, and camera model. If you domt know how to get this, just lets us know and we may be able to help. This allows us to provide the best possible feedback.

There are features in this gallery you may want to use: Theres a "Like" icon beside a comment; and theres the small "Nominate for Constructive Critique" link at the bottom of every comment. The Critique Team approves or denies submissions for constructive Critiques, and members can accrue points. Critique Team members cannot approve comments on their own feedback. When you provide constructive feedback, you can also start collecting points, which can mean you are improving to the point where you can see how to improve other members shots. To qualify as Constructive, the feedback has to improve you image, your skill, your knowledge of the photographic process, or post processing. Comments like nice shot, love the scenery, etc dont qualify.


Re sizing images:

Resize image: Image>Image size> set pixels per inch to 72; then set the longest side to what the site allows; then during the save as process, you will adjust the quality slider to get the right file size, then save.

Next: OPen the new image. Check for sharpness at 100%. It will very likely need to be sharpened. You can use whatever method you prefer; here is a reliable method you can use:

Filter>sharpen>unsharp mask; set Radius = 0.8; set threshold = 3; now slide the Amount slider all the way to the right, which oversharpens the shot; then slide it slowly back to the left until it doesnt look soft, and doesnt look too sharp. You can view your image and turn Preview on and off to see how youre doing. When your happy, press OK, then SAVE. Now upload.



Regards



Willie

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david1810
david1810  2 Australia
26 Jul 2012 - 2:35 AM

Hi

thankyou all for the feedback and comments. I was a little reluctant to submit at first , however, I am so glad I did. It is great that people like yourselves will give your time to the newbies like myself.

Thanks again

David

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paulcr
paulcr  91536 forum posts Ireland9 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2012 - 3:09 AM

Be interesting to see the original too.. Paul

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david1810
david1810  2 Australia
26 Jul 2012 - 7:12 AM

Hi paulcr

just checked out your pf wow!

more than happy to show the original. how can I do that?

thanks

Dave

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom845 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2012 - 7:46 AM

I'm pleased you did submit it. This section should be used for general help, but also to submit experimental images in order to gauge general reaction as tastes vary immensely.

You do need to adjust that tilt which is too obvious and I'm afraid things are a bit too far gone for me. This is when images become subjective and some will like this, some will not.

Paul

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paulcr
paulcr  91536 forum posts Ireland9 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jul 2012 - 12:53 AM


Quote: Hi paulcr

just checked out your pf wow!
more than happy to show the original. how can I do that?
thanks
Dave

Either just as you did with this one or as a version. Paul

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