like this tho I feel you could have lopped a heap off the top and a bit off the right ?? - Much of the sky is not as interesting as the foreground ??

db

Not sure what's happening in their relation to the BG - shadow ? PS work? - whatever there is a sense of them being 'glued' to the BG -

you could try removing them further from the BG and Putting in a reflector (Foil will do) perhaps slightly higher (just off frame) than them as a hair light which with fiddling will create a bit of separation from them and the BG

gentle - dunno what it means

BUT

1 - Modle is spelt model (I hope )

2 - really odd hand cut off - the hand is fundamental to the shot but it's lopped off ??

3 - her eyes are not on the same plain as the butterfly - at least to my eyes -(argue mine are wonky if you like)

4 - bit bleached on the right ??

- else ---- keep going

db

Great composition -

Gives the impression of being tilted which detracts for me ?

Dave