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03/07/2009 - 1:52 PM

Bottle, glass, specs.

Bottle, glass, specs.Maybe just a little to busy towards the lower part of the frame. Glasses seem (to me !) to add very little. but leave space to the left and right ! David
20/06/2009 - 10:08 AM

Cascades of flowers

Cascades of flowersLOL I will never get this, but everyone seems to do it, versions for me a variations on the same subject.... but..
V1 - for me a little burnt out in the foreground, and looks a little dis-organised, maybe just me!!!)
V2 - I think better than V1 but still burnt out in the foreground, and as with V1 bloom is partly out the frame.
V3 - Very nice;
V4 - Nice image of a garden, but from a photographic view point there is no clear point of focus... maybe a closer crop and a different/lower view point would bring out the true beautiful of the Lupins.
Hope my comments were taken as intended Smile
David
16/06/2009 - 8:24 PM

Field Strength

Field StrengthThe image is too central , square on and masked by the mid ground. The eye is not lead into the image as there is no clear point of interest. Sorry..but its a boring image.

Could I suggest the the OU photographic course :http://www3.open.ac.uk/courses/bin/p12.dll?C01T189
Its a good starting point and you get as much out as you put in...

Wish you all the best. David
25/05/2009 - 5:18 PM

Kyrenia

KyreniaLovely image I can see why you enlarged it... Would have been nice to see the bottom of the columns and maybe clone out he power socket.
David
14/05/2009 - 6:35 AM

Lake Garda at Simione , Italy

Lake Garda at Simione , ItalyStunning image and colours, love the presentation and how the foreground via the gangway leads you into the image. Great work.

Only minor comment I would make is that for me the boats cut off to hte left are slightly distracting although the man in the second boat appears to be in discussion with the person to the left.
02/05/2009 - 7:20 AM

free market

free marketCritique wanted!
There is no clean area in the image where the eye is drawn, people with no heads detract from the image for me. I think the image could be improved by either a wide angle view of the whole area , showing the social interaction or specific close up on the items for sale and the way they are laid out and contrast with each other.
David