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Nothing goes to waste in Burma. This is a blacksmith's work hut on Lake Inle and they are hammering out a knife blade from a car's rear-axle leaf spring. There is no shortage of labour in Burma. Here, one man holds the metal and plunges it into the forge, three more synchronising their hammering, and another sitting above the forge operating the bellows.

The colour 'popping' maybe cliched but it seemed to work here by emphasizing the focus of their activity. v2 is the purist mono.

Dave

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:EF70-200mm f/4L IS USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:3 Dec 2012 - 2:35 PM
Focal Length:75mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Fired
White Balance:Auto
Title:The Blacksmiths' Arms
Username:WhiteRose1 WhiteRose1
Uploaded:2 Jan 2013 - 7:34 AM
Tags:Black & white, Blacksmiths, Burma, Landscape / travel, Photo journalism
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marktc
marktc (e2 Member)
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2 Jan 2013 - 7:45 AM
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Both versions work brilliantly but I think the colour popping in v1 makes it that extra bit special. Very subtle but it hammers the point home (groan!).

Very well worked Dave a great image.

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barbarahirst
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2 Jan 2013 - 7:51 AM
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I am going to be boring here and be a purist...Wink
think that red is just tooo red
the moving hammer is what its all about for me tho' the expressions are also wonderful

Hermanus
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2 Jan 2013 - 7:51 AM
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Great photos and narrative Dave ! I also like the colour in V1 - it is subtle and not overdone - very artistic Smile

andylea
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2 Jan 2013 - 7:56 AM
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cracking work dave v1 just nicks it for me today a stunner nice one Wink
andy

abeeror2
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2 Jan 2013 - 8:08 AM
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Wow thats brilliant, love the movement in the hammer. What a fantasic capture! regards Kathryn

LynneJoyce
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2 Jan 2013 - 8:28 AM
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V1 for me - fantastic use of selective colour with great movement on that hammer, an amazing shot.

Last Modified By LynneJoyce at 2 Jan 2013 - 8:29 AM
Rogerex
2 Jan 2013 - 8:39 AM
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An excellent capture. I like the motion of the hammer, and the shade of red looks just right to me as steel goes through a variety of shades when it cools. I like the pose of the guy doing the holding too.
Roger

l1z
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2 Jan 2013 - 8:47 AM
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great photos, both are very good but for me V1 Smile

canonfan
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2 Jan 2013 - 8:51 AM
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Superb image Dave. The motion blur of the hammer has been well captured. What really stands out for me is the colour popping in V1
Jim

netta1234
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:00 AM
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A great set of mono images.Smile
NettaSmile

I think V1. works very well Dave, me not being a purest but! then again I like V2. as well, the most important thing from my point of view, is not colour pop or not, But the fact you have captured the movement of the hammer perfectly, now that is a dam good shot, regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

Badgerfred
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:17 AM
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Excellent Dave,
Fred.

rontear
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:23 AM
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Good connection Wink Dave, intense image.
Ron.

CarolG
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:23 AM
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A great capture, Dave, and the colour popping works so well, an excellent presentation. Carol

Gerryrys
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:24 AM
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Version 2 for me Dave. The tones are perfect and the motion of the hammer makes the image a bit special. Perhaps I am a bit old fashioned but I find the colour popping a bit over the top for what is already a superb image.

Happy New Year.

Gerry

mrswoolybill
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:31 AM
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V2 for me (though mousing over is fun...) As Barbs says, this is about the moving hammer, it's the contrast of the motion blur and the calm concentration in that man's face. The colour is fun but a bit of a distraction.
Moira

woolybill1
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:43 AM
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Making do and mending: it used to be popular in the U.K. before the throwaway society took a hold.
Blacksmithing is endlessly fascinating. The concentration in those taut muscles speaks volumes.
An excellent study, the close crop and the mono are perfect.
Mind you, it's V2 for me: I'm having a year of being a purist . . .
Regards
Bill

RazvanD
2 Jan 2013 - 9:43 AM
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Great, i like the fact that you caught the movement of the hammer well.
V1 for me because of the red hot metal.

Razvan

Herge88
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:56 AM
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Love the title and the selective colour, also the movement just rounds off a fabulous image for me, well done.

Best Matt

Deep_Bhatia
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2 Jan 2013 - 10:03 AM
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V1 is wonderful. Red horn iron depicts it nicely. Deep

leontari
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2 Jan 2013 - 10:13 AM
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Two brilliant photos Dave. I do like the motion of the hammer. V2 for me
Effrossini

NDODS
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2 Jan 2013 - 10:40 AM
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"All great photographs are forged from a great mind"

Regards Nathan

hasslebladuk
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2 Jan 2013 - 10:46 AM
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Powerfull shots
mike

RonnieAG
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2 Jan 2013 - 10:52 AM
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The colour popping works very well for me, Dave: a great shot with interesting explanative narrative into one aspect of life here.
Recycling at it's very best perhaps.......needs must I suppose.
Ronnie.

DicksPics
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2 Jan 2013 - 11:10 AM
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That's what you call 'Team Work'!
Version 1 is the one for me - like the workers(hopefully), your focus is on the red hot part of the steel!

Richard

lonely_oryx
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2 Jan 2013 - 11:19 AM
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Fascinating shot. I believe these two also do vasectomies.

alistairfarrugia
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2 Jan 2013 - 11:20 AM
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V1, not just for the colour-popping but for the slightly more detailed shadows, for instance, the man's shorts. Was the hammer closest to the axle going down or up at the moment of capture? If it was going down, the motion blur says otherwise and that's likely the result of a first/front curtain flash. A rear-curtain would have probably resulted in a nicer looking motion blur.

Still the blurring adds movement and it's a nice addition. The picture would have also been just as nice without the two other hammers on the left hand side showing at the very edge of the frame.

Regardless of my nit-picking though, I am proud to give my vote to this picture as well, and taking the vote count past the Readers' Choice mark of 30. Well deserved!

(In the meantime, I realised I was the 31st to vote hehe...)

Last Modified By alistairfarrugia at 2 Jan 2013 - 11:21 AM
Cliff1944
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2 Jan 2013 - 11:43 AM
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The colour in V1 is quite subtle and works well for me - but both versions are very good. interesting commentary too.
Cliff

Irishkate
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2 Jan 2013 - 11:44 AM
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Fantastic image Dave and perfect use of colour popping.
I'd say that colour was true.
Some interesting comments! I believe these two also do vasectomies. OUCH!
First class Dave.
KateGrinGrinGrin

AnnChown
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2 Jan 2013 - 11:49 AM
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The colour popping really works for me Dave, so v1 gets my vote. Excellent blurring and great composition. Love it!
Ann

movement and concentration make this one Dave V2 for me

GrahamGrinGrinGrin

Rende
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2 Jan 2013 - 12:26 PM
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Very effective use of selective colouring Dave! I also like the movement of the hammer.
Rende

maggietear
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2 Jan 2013 - 12:35 PM
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Great image, not posed which is even better! I love the beads of sweat, a great moment caught, Dave
Maggie

morpheus1955
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2 Jan 2013 - 12:45 PM
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Superb image Dave, for me it has to be V1

Hugh

taggart
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2 Jan 2013 - 12:48 PM
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The story here is co-operation!

working together

We all could learn something from this wonderful image

WesternRed
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2 Jan 2013 - 1:55 PM
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Dave would you believe I compose and crop with the camera. But I would never teach this way.
So I would have had two heads in. Not too good for your tag Photo Journalism either.
WesternRed.

nonur
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2 Jan 2013 - 2:30 PM
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One of the most appropriate uses of colour popping, Dave. I love it!

prabhusinha
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2 Jan 2013 - 2:33 PM
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Wonderful idea.

AnneWorner
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2 Jan 2013 - 2:38 PM
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Definitely v2 for me. For some reason, the selective red colouring takes away from the motion of the hammer, which I think is more important here.

Anne

rayme330
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2 Jan 2013 - 4:05 PM
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The selective colouring works for me, Dave cracking shot.

Ray

Rolepics
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2 Jan 2013 - 4:06 PM
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V1 is very effective, the composition is very good too with the movement of the hammer.
Carole

SlowSong
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2 Jan 2013 - 4:33 PM
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I think we need the bit of red in this image as it's not clear what it's supposed to be in the totally mono version. Very interesting subject.
x

Growmore
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2 Jan 2013 - 4:54 PM
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Well i for one like your colour popping and that hammer movement is brilliant Dave.
Gary

TrevBatWCC
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2 Jan 2013 - 5:12 PM
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A fine candid capture, Dave....definitely V1 for me! Wink
Trev Smile

aniamoore
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2 Jan 2013 - 5:56 PM
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Make hay while the sun shines!SmileTongue Like it, Dave!Smile
AniaWink

franken
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2 Jan 2013 - 6:17 PM
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Both work for me Dave.

Ken

fazzer
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2 Jan 2013 - 7:35 PM
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great choice of shutter speed and love seeing the make shift anvil
regards
jeremy

ChristineD
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:29 PM
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Both versions work well ,prefer v1 with the touch of colour,

pdcche
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2 Jan 2013 - 9:50 PM
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Great detail and captured movement from the sledge hammer Dave, Peter..

HELANA
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2 Jan 2013 - 10:08 PM
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Both images work very well Dave, but that touch of colour make V1 extra special for me.
ElenaSmile

sweetpea62
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2 Jan 2013 - 10:16 PM
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Glad to make this excellent shot 70 Dave..Lin

JimV
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3 Jan 2013 - 1:08 AM
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Many interesting comments Dave, I think Alistair makes a good point and explains it well, after much thought I'm going with V2!
Rgds., Jim

Rock
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3 Jan 2013 - 9:44 AM
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Grand work Lad.

Rock

Humblebee
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3 Jan 2013 - 1:48 PM
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Another 1st class image Dave, and I enjoyed your write up. V1 takes my vote hands down, the colour pop works well in drawing your attention to the point of their co-operation ... Carol Grin

derekhansen
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3 Jan 2013 - 2:15 PM
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Superb Dave. The toning is very nice indeed and I love the sense of movement in the hammers. I am not always keen on colour popped images but this is an exception. No hesitation in awarding my UA
Derek

Trev_B
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3 Jan 2013 - 3:10 PM
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The colour popping works really well along with the motion in the hammers... happy New Year Dave,

Trev

Bob_V
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3 Jan 2013 - 3:24 PM
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Like the bit of color and movement in V1 Dave, some superb work.
Bob

almiles
3 Jan 2013 - 4:33 PM
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Like many others, I love the colour popping and the streaking on the hammer is excellent providing lots of extra energy and movement to what is already a dramatic close up image.

xwang
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3 Jan 2013 - 4:41 PM
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Great work, Dave. What I like most is the movement of the hammer... I wonder if you have more shots to show the movement...

Gavin_Duxbury
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3 Jan 2013 - 7:52 PM
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Great movement and colour popping.

Regards.

gavin

helenlinda
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4 Jan 2013 - 7:43 AM
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That tiny bit of red certainly works to focus attention - so v1 gets my vote today SmileSmile
Helen

PaulLiley
4 Jan 2013 - 8:03 AM
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Wow thats really really good Dave. Love V1 with the 'popped' colour of the steel. Cliche it may be buts its totally suitable here. i believe in using techniques when they are appropriate. Its the over use at times when its not, which turns people off these techniques. The expressions and body language is so intense and focused. Paul

Last Modified By PaulLiley at 4 Jan 2013 - 8:07 AM
alsoppdigitalart
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4 Jan 2013 - 4:44 PM
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Good timing Dave, it sure looks hot work you can see it in the capture, I like both but would go for v2 if pushed. good work as always.

John

Lillian
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4 Jan 2013 - 4:47 PM
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Definitely V1 for me the touch of colour
adds to the movement of the image
superb
Lillian

VanillaPenguin
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4 Jan 2013 - 9:34 PM
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Stunning image Dave, brilliant clarity .... v2 for me......... with the quality of shot, I think perhaps it doesn't need the pop.

GarethSmile

annettep38
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4 Jan 2013 - 10:54 PM
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v1 for me that is expert selective colouring. I can just imagine the smell and the sound.

Chinga
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7 Jan 2013 - 6:23 AM
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V1 for me. It is the correct colour of the iron when hot from the forge ready for shaping.
I know this because my father was a blacksmith and I witness this transformations in his workshop and I operated the Huge wind blower to keep the fire going.
Wonderful shots. IB

LexEquine
8 Jan 2013 - 7:15 PM
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'Super-tonality & Compositions' ~ Peter Wink

avacreates
15 Jan 2013 - 11:37 AM
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I also feel its about the settings you used to get the special effect of the hammer movement - brilliant
AVA

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