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It's been a long time since I've last used my camera...and now that I'm back in business again, I sincerely ask for any type of critique. Why is this shot bad, or why is it neutral to the viewer? what should have been done differently?
Any critique at all is highly appreciated. Thank you in advance.

Brand:OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Camera:Olympus SP-570UZ
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Aug 2011 - 8:27 PM
Focal Length:21.5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/4.2
Shutter Speed:1/20sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:blue cup of coffee
Username:Dg Dg
Uploaded:22 Aug 2011 - 2:52 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7391 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom952 Constructive Critique Points
22 Aug 2011 - 3:04 PM

Intriguing image. The mouth hidden, the eyes firmly fixed on who knows what, the negative space. Like it a lot.
Would possibly look good in b&w too?
Moira

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barbarahirst
barbarahirst e2 Member 6barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
22 Aug 2011 - 4:07 PM

Why such a negative write up ????
It is an intriging image and I would love to see it in mono

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wyatturp
wyatturp  8 England
1 Oct 2011 - 9:36 PM

Like this well done as Moira said b&w would be niceSmile

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