Interesting critique !! I can't see any glare and the leaves act as a frame for the tiny fruit. Exceptional detail and the different shades of green are an excellent contrast to the very dark background. Something unusual as we have come to expect..I like this very much.
Di

This is lovely..fabulous colour and I love the way it fills the frame. I think I might have cropped in slightly to remove the two corners of background but others might see it differently.
Di

Wonderful colours in this shot. I love the way you have filled the frame. I think I might have cropped out the tiny bit of blue from the top left as it catches my eye.
Di

It is lovely Laura. The colour is beautiful and especially so against the black background. Excellent detail too. I wonder it it might look better if the top of the flower wasn't missing or alternatively a closer crop with the centre facing the camera a little more so that the tiny petals at the centre are thrown more into the spotlight.
Di