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This is my 1st go at portraits. Taken of my twins. I used a white bedsheet pinned to the wall, natural light from the right and a refector on the left. I have boosted the levels to make it a bit more punchy and stand out. I feel it works but will be glad for any pointers if you feel it looks wrong.
Thanks for looking.
Dan

Camera:Sony Alpha 350
Lens:18-70mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Twins Portrait 1
Username:DJLeroy DJLeroy
Uploaded:18 Mar 2009 - 11:22 AM
Tags:General, Portraits / people
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davidbailie
davidbailie e2 Member 11451 forum postsdavidbailie vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2009 - 11:29 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Not sure what's happening in their relation to the BG - shadow ? PS work? - whatever there is a sense of them being 'glued' to the BG -

you could try removing them further from the BG and Putting in a reflector (Foil will do) perhaps slightly higher (just off frame) than them as a hair light which with fiddling will create a bit of separation from them and the BG

Last Modified By davidbailie at 18 Mar 2009 - 11:30 AM

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A Booth
A Booth e2 Member 12A Booth vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2009 - 2:59 PM

superbly lit natural child portraits. excellent.

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puffinlady
22 Apr 2009 - 8:23 AM

Well done! Great capture of expression!

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