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Tree leavess I saw on the Cruise

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Brand:EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Camera:Canon PowerShot SX220 HS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Jan 2007 - 12:34 PM
Focal Length:6mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.7
Aperture:f/4.8
Shutter Speed:1/485sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:80
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
Title:Tree leavess I saw on the Cruise
Username:dommi9877 dommi9877
Uploaded:6 Mar 2012 - 10:10 PM
Tags:Flowers & plants, Wildlife / nature
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Stenk
Stenk  7 England6 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2012 - 10:15 PM

nice pattern shot, well photographed

Steve,

Last Modified By Moderator Team at 6 Mar 2012 - 10:22 PM

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pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1577 Constructive Critique Points
8 Mar 2012 - 9:42 PM

The palm leaves look good against the sky, Dommi, and I like the way you have almost filled the frame with them. You also have the centre nicely placed on a diagonal, and some nice light.
I have several like this, and like to put the centre of my palm running corner to corner, but that's a personal preference.
I thought this image had the potential to be a little more "arty" and so have done a modification where I simply cropped the right side, to give a square format, and made some contrast and colour adjustments. Hope you approve.
Pamela.

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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
8 Mar 2012 - 11:12 PM

This is a nice shot and there's plenty of good advice above that I'll not repeat. I'll make one suggestion, which is that the leaves aren't in very good condition, with lots of brown spots and so on. I wonder if another tree nearby might have had healthier-looking leaves?

Former world chess champion Emanuel Lasker said, "When you see a good move, look for a better one." The same could be said of photography. Smile

Dave.

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