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Camera:Pentax K-x Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:At rest B & W
Username:DPhillips DPhillips
Uploaded:9 Jan 2011 - 2:51 PM
Tags:General
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devlin
devlin  4651 forum posts India39 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jan 2011 - 3:25 PM

Hi Dorian,

I guess you already know about the masts distracting Smile so i wont go into it, i offer up an alternative viewpoint if indeed stepping the boats was the objective.

Cheers and Hope this helps

PS: - Always a good idea to mention in the description what you were hoping to achieve Smile

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10866 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2862 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jan 2011 - 3:45 PM

I just loaded a toned mod of the version I loaded on you last shot. The different again being that I started with a brighter original, then used a tone to get some warmth.



regards


Willie

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DPhillips
DPhillips  4 South Africa
9 Jan 2011 - 5:08 PM

Thank you both. I find merit in your ideas and will act accordingly.

Dorian

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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jan 2011 - 1:55 AM

I like the crops...as well as the masts, I found the triangle of sky top left a distraction tending to drag the eye out of the picture

Stephen

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jan 2011 - 1:35 PM

I preferred the colour version, but see my comments on that one. People often seem to convert to B&W out of fashion rather than the image requiring it.

paul

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