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These gentlemen visit our patio daily to partake of their evening meals. All others are required to keep their distance.

I know this shot needs a LOT OF ADJUSTMENT and have done some.

I an sure that our experts are going to have fun with this one!!!Grin

Brand:Pentax
Camera:Pentax K-x
Lens:PENTAX-F 70-200mm F4-5.6
Date Taken:4 Dec 2010 - 4:53 PM
Focal Length:115mm
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/640sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Portrait
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:The Generals
Username:DPhillips DPhillips
Uploaded:23 Jan 2011 - 4:29 PM
Tags:Humour / fun
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 101119 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada3113 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2011 - 4:53 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A delightful shot, well captured. As you say, also fun to play with.

Ive loaded a simple mod just to move that bird on the left in from the edge, and moved the flower down a little, then cropped. Slightly brightened the birds, ans thats it!



REGARDS



Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 23 Jan 2011 - 4:55 PM

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Maiwand
Maiwand Plus Member 8Maiwand vcard England70 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2011 - 7:55 PM

What a fascinating bunch. Well spotted.
Ron

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DPhillips
DPhillips  4 South Africa
24 Jan 2011 - 10:06 AM

Thank you Willie. I like the mod, but please tell me how you did it!

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paulbroad
paulbroad  7107 forum posts United Kingdom917 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jan 2011 - 10:04 PM

I would letter box. Crop top and bottom a lot to just produce a wide thin image. Then try a touch of dodge tool on each birds head just to see if a little more detail comes out. Well spotted.

paul

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JamesGarfield
25 Jan 2011 - 4:26 PM

Well spotted opportunity, I've done a simular mod as Banehawi, I've moved the bird on the left into the space between the 2nd and 3rd bird, cropped in a little closer, removed the flower and leg of the table? I've upped the contrast and levels a bit too.

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fudgy
fudgy  448 forum posts United Kingdom
19 Feb 2011 - 1:54 AM

adorable , I would love visitors like these Smile

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