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this was taken at Pulbrough brooks, in the front garden, of jan of 2010.

Camera:Sony A230
Lens:vivitar af 100-300mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Out my way
Username:drayl002 drayl002
Uploaded:29 Apr 2010 - 7:52 AM
Tags:Wildlife / nature
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 74167 forum postsKarenFB vcard England159 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2010 - 8:44 AM

This is a brilliantly timed shot! I love the way you've captured the Great Tit coming in to land.

I think I would have made a few tiny adjustments to improve the image. Firstly, I would have made a small clockwise rotation to make the feeder upright, then I would have cropped a little off the top (to remove the green bit) and bottom (also removing the green bit). When cropping the sides I think I would have tried not to cut into the flying bird's feathers (though this may have been nipped when you took the picture). All of these adjustments are minor and doesn't detract from the fact it's a lovely image - well done! Smile

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 103956 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland24 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2010 - 11:15 AM

super timing

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Ray42
Ray42  6 England3 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2010 - 6:28 PM

Good timing and detail - a pity you clipped part of his wings - keep it up

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Gezina
Gezina  7 United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2010 - 9:59 PM

Well timed shot Luke and very good advise from Karen - Ina

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