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Another of my occasional fake tilt/shift images. This is Estes Park, Colorado, a bustling little resort town at the foot of the Rockies. The town is at an altitude of 8,000ft and the moutains in the distance rise above 14,000ft, so still have deep snow cover even in late June.

I'm not sure this is quite as effective as the other two fake tilt-shifts I've uploaded (here and here), possibly because the road sloping up to the camera makes the viewer feel more a part of the scene and possibly because the range of sharp focus is rather large and doesn't include any large objects that look obviously like models. In any case, I'm rather pleased with the shot and I'd be interested to hear your thoughts on it.

I discovered two fun facts while writing this: Estes Park contains the hotel that inspired Stephen King's The Shining and the road in the photograph is, appropriately but immodestly, named Wonderview Avenue. (Well, OK, not entirely appropriately, since an Avenue is supposed to be lined by trees. But you know what I mean.)

All comments and criticism welcome.

Dave.

Friday, 19th June, 2009.
40mm, f/5.6, 1/1600s, ISO-400.

(Yes, the ISO is too high. The drive up to Estes Park goes through a dark-ish canyon and I'd had to push up the ISO to get fast enough shutter speeds on that road. Looks like I forgot to turn it back down.)

Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:Canon 17-40mm f/4 L
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Mini Mountains (II)
Username:DRicherby DRicherby
Uploaded:19 Mar 2010 - 12:33 PM
Tags:Colorado, Digitally manipulated, Estes park, Fake tilt-shift, Landscape / travel, Road trip, Rockies, Rocky mountains
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JOKEN
JOKEN  5 United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 1:15 PM

Recalls a memory for me - our motel, last June, was just on the left. I like this shot apart from the location being at the start of our Rockies hliday

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Zoundz
Zoundz  5 Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 1:16 PM

I do love these sorts of shots - and they are something I want to try more of myself, I did a few years ago, and none since! Smile I think this is a fine example myself!

xx

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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 5Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 1:28 PM

I'm not familiar with the tilt shift, will have to check it out. Nice capture of this lovely area............Sandy

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tigertimb
tigertimb  640 forum posts United Kingdom66 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 4:39 PM

Nicely done Dave and certainly feels like a miniature and a great shot too with that lovely view to the mountains behind.
The effect would obviously be stronger with a shallower DOF, but I think it works nicely already.
The one thing not quite working for me are the blurry trees on the hill to the right; they're at the same distance as the town which is in sharp focus, so I think they need to be too. On the hill on the left, you've dealt with the same issue nicely with the cabin, but the trees again feel just slightly soft.
Tim

Last Modified By tigertimb at 19 Mar 2010 - 4:41 PM

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AnneWorner
AnneWorner e2 Member 6602 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States41 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 5:28 PM

I prefer the previous tilt/shift images, precisely for the reasons you state above.

Quote: the range of sharp focus is rather large and doesn't include any large objects that look obviously like models.

The mountains seem just too soft compared to the rest of the image. I also would have liked to see the original shot as a v2 - always interesting for a comparison.

Anne

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barbarahirst
barbarahirst e2 Member 5barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 6:00 PM

I am not sure what you have done here
But I do prefer this to the two other examples you mentioned
I am always interested in "new" ideas ...

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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 6:11 PM

Tim, you're right about the trees on the right. I did try to unblur them but think the problem is they're not very sharp or, at least, distinct, in the original image which, as per Anne's request, is now uploaded as a second version.

Alas, I forgot to straighten the so-called straight version. I'm going to leave it wonky because it was one of those which I straightened by eye, rather than by any reference line, so I doubt I'd get the same angle anyway.

Last Modified By DRicherby at 19 Mar 2010 - 6:14 PM

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baclark
baclark  53740 forum posts United Kingdom24 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 6:24 PM

I like the idea of the effect, but looking at the far mountains makes my eyes water! Not sure having them out of focus floats my boat, but that's just me! Love the road lines which pull you right through the image. I can see how the road got it's name.
Barbara

PS Thanks so much for the mods and comments. I'm always wary of mono that I'll make areas too black and detail will be lost .... memo to self, must be braver!

Last Modified By baclark at 19 Mar 2010 - 6:26 PM

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AnneWorner
AnneWorner e2 Member 6602 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States41 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2010 - 7:28 PM

Thanks for v2 - very interesting to see the effect the tilt/shift has had. That said, I quite like the original Smile
Anne

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ChiliMan
ChiliMan e2 Member 7135 forum postsChiliMan vcard Singapore16 Constructive Critique Points
20 Mar 2010 - 4:03 PM

Very interesting outcome...although I agree with Anne: I prefer the original.

That aside, the Stephen King reference is good enough for me Smile

A.

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gingerdelight
22 Mar 2010 - 9:16 PM

Yes, I also prefer the original in this instance.
Carol

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videotec
videotec  5 United Kingdom
23 Mar 2010 - 11:44 AM

Very interesting narration--I too prefer the original, and a great vanishing point--super shots
Regards
pete

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essexdean
essexdean  5 England
23 Mar 2010 - 7:30 PM

Version 1 for me, just find it more interesting to look around, kept me captured for ages.

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morpheus1955
morpheus1955 e2 Member 7morpheus1955 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2010 - 1:12 AM

super image, great dof, very well taken and presented.

Hugh

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willgriffiths
willgriffiths e2 Member 6willgriffiths vcard Wales
24 Mar 2010 - 8:45 AM

Excellent love the two.
Will.

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imagio
imagio  7 England1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2010 - 4:59 PM

I like the idea (V1) as it seems more interesting looking around the image.

Bernie

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madbilly
madbilly  5 England4 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2010 - 7:28 PM

I prefer V2, the trees look too far out of focus to other parts of the image.sorry. The view in v2 is excellent, pretty envious of your trip out there.

regards

Bill

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Phil1958
Phil1958  5272 forum posts Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2010 - 9:06 PM

Two excellent shots, like them both,

Phil

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EAS
EAS e2 Member 5EAS vcard Scotland13 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2010 - 9:28 PM

The view in V2 is superb. Love the details and colours. The mountains in that version are stunning and remind me of trips to both the US and through the Andes.

Ann

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davey_griffo
25 Mar 2010 - 12:25 PM

I see what you mean (having looked at your other shots) about it not being quite as effective. It doesn't pull you in quite as easily as the previous 2.

Having said that, I like the original anyway (just to be contrary).

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Francois Lepinay

Great view, very Colorado indeed.

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raygregson
raygregson e2 Member 6raygregson vcard United Kingdom
25 Mar 2010 - 4:56 PM

good image,v2 for me.ray

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metro074
metro074 e2 Member 4metro074 vcard Australia8 Constructive Critique Points
25 Mar 2010 - 10:42 PM

Wonderful images. I like the way you have merged in and out of the picture leaving detailed clarity in the centre of V1. Well done
Carol

Last Modified By metro074 at 25 Mar 2010 - 10:43 PM

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FeatherFriend
FeatherFriend e2 Member 6FeatherFriend vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2010 - 2:49 PM

I don't feel qualified to pass comment here Dave other than to say I like V2 best,
Geoff.

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bliba
bliba  8 Austria2 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2010 - 5:01 PM

I prefer V1.....very interesting...great use of the selective focus .
looks almost like a Lensbaby shot - ALMOST Smile

thanks for your honest feedback on my backstage series!

have a good weekend


oliver 8-)

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MilanaG
MilanaG  8 Bulgaria
26 Mar 2010 - 8:20 PM

...v1 for me too Smile...good result!
Milena

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celestun
celestun e2 Member 1029 forum postscelestun vcard United Kingdom14 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2010 - 11:03 PM

Great work with the fake tilt-shifting! I like the effect!

Well done!

Tim

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BURNSIE
BURNSIE e2 Member 525 forum postsBURNSIE vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2010 - 2:09 PM

Nice effective shot.
Regards
Burnsie

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fighterjockey
27 Mar 2010 - 2:43 PM

woow!
lovely effect.
look like a real 3d image. giving a sense of depth.
Smile

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rob27
rob27  4 United States2 Constructive Critique Points
29 Mar 2010 - 8:09 PM

Hi - Really enjoy your portfolio, most everything in it reflects your great eye and clear vision. BTW, txs for your earlier comments on several of my shots. In particular, you're correct that you'd seen the "PEEK-A-BOO" image previously, but deleted it to make several improvements suggested by you and others. Wasn't able to edit the first posting, so just relisted it. Thanks again, and best! - Rob

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astyag
astyag  612 Constructive Critique Points
3 Apr 2010 - 8:29 PM

Dave this is so creative! like the idea of going through the two V's well done
Astyag

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Animalsmagic
11 Apr 2010 - 5:58 PM

Really like the tilt shift effect, yes there are 'little discrepances' but i think it adds to the desired effect, very creative work
Mark

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