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A small girl bringing water for daily use in a village with smile. Pot may be wide open so split some water on her..

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:75.0 - 300.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 117.2 - 468.7 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:13 Nov 2011 - 4:09 PM
Focal Length:105mm
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:girl
Username:dsrathore999 dsrathore999
Uploaded:23 Dec 2011 - 3:36 PM
Tags:Child, Girl, India, Portraits / people, Rajasthan, Village
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guler
guler  2 Turkey
23 Dec 2011 - 4:42 PM

Very good portrait

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SueEley
SueEley e2 Member 8271 forum postsSueEley vcard Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
23 Dec 2011 - 5:49 PM

She is lovely and it is good to see what she is doing. The bright highlights on the right hand side, and the pale object behind and above here are a bit distracting. If you wanted to, you could clone colour over the places where it has burnt out, and also clone out the light coloured object.

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SueEley
SueEley e2 Member 8271 forum postsSueEley vcard Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
23 Dec 2011 - 6:07 PM

I uploaded a mod with a bit of cloning, and also brightened her face. Your lens might have been able to go a bit wider on the aperture, to throw her background out a bit more and also increase the shutter speed (the shot does not look totally sharp when you go in close, and although this could be due to downsizing, i shutter speed and focal length could have been factors). As it looks like she had spotted you anyway, you could perhaps have waited for her to move in front of a less distracting background? Or even asked her to? Well done for getting the shot, though. I always feel very embarrassed about photographing people.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10849 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2843 Constructive Critique Points
23 Dec 2011 - 11:08 PM

A good shot Daleep, - and the mod makes it better.


regards


Willie

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HectorRivera
24 Dec 2011 - 4:10 AM

Gfreat smile, nice shot

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dsrathore999
24 Dec 2011 - 5:43 AM

Thank you all for the comments and valuable suggestions

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
24 Dec 2011 - 2:41 PM

Basically a nice interesting image. I would darken the background, currently clearly visible as a car, or, better still, shoot from a lower viewpoint looking up. the light is all on the vessel and not her face. This is a classic case of a need to switch on the camera flash at half power. It would have punched some light into her face giving a very fine image along with that lower viewpoint.

Paul

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