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If you photograph a trained dancer, ask her to dance...

Camera:Contax RTS II
Lens:85mm
Recording media:T-Max P-3200
Title:Joceline in motion
Username:dudler dudler
Uploaded:31 Oct 2004 - 8:37 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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snoops
snoops e2 Member 10snoops vcard
31 Oct 2004 - 8:43 AM

Nice composition and use of light. Not too sure about the grain tho'. Click

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akh
akh e2 Member 101149 forum postsakh vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
31 Oct 2004 - 8:57 AM

Like the pose and the angles of the body but I feel that the grain is too heavy for the picture.
Tony

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G3
G3 e2 Member 12G3 vcard United States2 Constructive Critique Points
31 Oct 2004 - 8:58 AM

I just had that very opertuinity this night..not as beautiful as yours but I do agree..dancers KNOW how to move

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ken.barrett@talk21.com
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31 Oct 2004 - 8:59 AM

agree about the grain

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adversa
adversa e2 Member 13adversa vcard United Kingdom
31 Oct 2004 - 9:05 AM

Lovely image. Well done! Bill

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alfsky
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31 Oct 2004 - 9:06 AM

lovely poise and elegance..bit to grainy but still a lovely shot..well done..click

alfsky

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kaybee
kaybee e2 Member 103954 forum postskaybee vcard Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
31 Oct 2004 - 9:12 AM

Nice shot - grain just too much

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eernst
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31 Oct 2004 - 9:36 AM

Too much grain, nice pic though

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tiptoe
tiptoe e2 Member 10267 forum poststiptoe vcard
31 Oct 2004 - 9:44 AM

Beautiful
M♥

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Ian G W
Ian G W e2 Member 11396 forum postsIan G W vcard England3 Constructive Critique Points
31 Oct 2004 - 10:24 AM

Nice composition. Grainy, yes, but I don't think that destroys the elegance.

Click.

Ian

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ginz04
ginz04 e2 Member 10278 forum postsginz04 vcard United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
31 Oct 2004 - 12:26 PM

excellent love the grain - perhaps just either remove curtain or close it.

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conrad
conrad e2 Member 1010877 forum postsconrad vcard 116 Constructive Critique Points
31 Oct 2004 - 5:30 PM

Excellent shot. Don't mind the grain at all, I think it works well here. I just would have liked to have seen a different background, but oh well - it's a great shot as it is.

Conrad

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teena40
teena40 e2 Member 1066 forum poststeena40 vcard
1 Nov 2004 - 10:48 PM

Potentially a superb shot, the grain dose not help, but you have a fantastis model to work with, very well done, look forward to more, missed all your work but I will look out for it in the future.
Regards
Teena*

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david j. green
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7 Nov 2004 - 2:00 PM

A great pose with good lighting, click

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jeffa
jeffa e2 Member 932 forum postsjeffa vcard United Kingdom
24 Jun 2005 - 1:16 PM

Terrific.
Jeff

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C_Daniels
C_Daniels e2 Member 9399 forum postsC_Daniels vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2005 - 10:49 AM

Stunning pose and composition!
Has grace...
Caleb,

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john short
john short e2 Member 1125 forum postsjohn short vcard United Kingdom
17 Nov 2005 - 11:11 AM

excellent composition and light, The grain is not for me, but that's just a personal opinion.

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UserRemoved
30 Jan 2006 - 4:42 AM

NO DOUBT - SHE IS GORGEOUS, here and in other photos you've posted !!!

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LauraVest
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15 Jul 2006 - 5:49 PM

I absolutley love this!!

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CecilyC
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23 Aug 2006 - 5:46 PM

Thank you so much for your comment! Smile It was actually embarrassingly easy; just chose a 'diffuse glow' filter and adjusted the graininess, glow- and clear amount Smile childishly easy, eh? Smile

Catharina

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monica_g
monica_g e2 Member 8monica_g vcard
22 Nov 2006 - 7:17 PM

what a beautiful photo.
excellent form, and shape.
i love her flowing outfit.

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bazjean30
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15 Apr 2007 - 6:50 AM

very nice form. lovely shot

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farfett2001
farfett2001 e2 Member 13farfett2001 vcard Malta
11 Jul 2007 - 9:32 PM

Sorry and honestly to say that the pose is not good enough the person looks like she have three legs, also about the grain effect it seems that the backround is not well exposed so the grain had not come out well. It looks that overal exposure is a bit under because when you are dealing with this high contrast effect all you need to do compensate in the film develope or compensate with a reflector while you are taken this shot. It will be easly be done because you have a good source of lighting there. It's a law to understand that b/w had to be exposed to the shadows and colour is the opposit to the high lights.

Mario

Last Modified By Dave at 11 Jul 2007 - 9:37 PM

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gilda
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8 Sep 2007 - 6:10 PM

Beautiful
Marta

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focused-photography
focused-photography e2 Member 10259 forum postsfocused-photography vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Dec 2007 - 8:05 AM

Good again.

Carsten

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thorn
thorn e2 Member 10124 forum poststhorn vcard Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
3 Mar 2008 - 3:17 PM

Perfect,love the grain,angle,dof,detail,lighting and presentation.take care,AnnSmile

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Cj-Photography
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31 Mar 2008 - 6:04 PM

great shot, pose and love the light

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MissJay
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9 Apr 2008 - 12:01 AM

My favorite of the bunch, simply stunning, very good job!

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ToothPilot
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8 Jan 2009 - 8:01 AM

Dont agree with Mario. To photograph dancers is so elegant and graceful. I wish the exposure was a bit better, but the pose and energy in her body is fantastic.
Love it.
Hendrik

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chicproduction
chicproduction e2 Member 10chicproduction vcard United Kingdom
1 Feb 2009 - 2:05 PM

Stunning & I like!



Thanks for your comments.
Richie

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xcloverx
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2 Nov 2009 - 1:51 PM

This is stunning. Joceline is graceful as she is beautiful. I adore the grainy effect of this image.

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RogerMann
RogerMann e2 Member 4RogerMann vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
12 Aug 2010 - 9:58 AM

Dancers do it best. This use of natural light complements the image and personally I like the grain.

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martinalberts
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19 Aug 2010 - 3:20 PM

Very good picture............

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Bonico
Bonico e2 Member 4Bonico vcard Romania
2 Mar 2011 - 1:57 PM

Nice model!
Bogdan

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Francois Lepinay
Francois Lepinay e2 Member 11Francois Lepinay vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Sep 2011 - 5:52 PM

Some disagree as to if it is a nice pose. Maybe a contortion more like, but a nice one indeed.

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PaulLiley
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18 Apr 2012 - 12:59 PM

Love the pose and grainy presentation. Excellent work. Paul

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1881
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1 May 2012 - 6:06 PM

A CLASSIC photo.
SANJEEV

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HollySamEdwards
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11 May 2012 - 11:27 PM

Wow, I love the pose and grainy effect
Holly

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SuperRoo
SuperRoo e2 Member 863 forum postsSuperRoo vcard Australia1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jun 2012 - 11:20 PM

A beautiful image... great pose and lighting... but have to agree with Roy regarding the amount of grain, a bit less would improve it in my opinion.

Paul

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TwistedHearts
TwistedHearts e2 Member 4TwistedHearts vcard United States
24 Jul 2012 - 6:59 PM

I really love the grainy texture and the pose!!! The texture makes it seem so old and priceless. Absolutely beautiful.

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yultony
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28 Jul 2012 - 11:39 AM

Like the pose
Tony

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LexEquine
LexEquine e2 Member 8LexEquine vcard United States19 Constructive Critique Points
30 Sep 2012 - 8:58 PM

'Superb & graceful monochrome Image & Composition' ~ Peter Smile

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focused-photography
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24 Oct 2012 - 7:34 AM

Great one.

Carsten

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Ayoob
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14 Dec 2012 - 8:25 PM

GORGEOUS SHOT..........Grin

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shaunhodge
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10 Feb 2013 - 10:40 AM

agree the grain is a bit to much but a very strong image

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KangaRU
KangaRU e2 Member 8KangaRU vcard United Kingdom
8 Jun 2013 - 7:23 AM

Love the back lighting with the fabric cascading off her well posed body.

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TanyaH
TanyaH Critique Team 11687 forum postsTanyaH vcard United Kingdom79 Constructive Critique Points
27 Feb 2014 - 12:15 PM

Gee, what can I say that hasn't already been said above?! Superb image, although I'm not decided on the grain - I'd loved to have seen more detail in both her face and the musculature. But it does add a very dream-like quality, on the other hand! Oh well ... I'll just say that the title says it all for me really - best advice I've heard for a while. Grin

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ExLanPhoto
ExLanPhoto e2 Member ExLanPhoto vcard England
23 Apr 2014 - 5:53 PM

Fabulous shot of this subject. The grain really works and gives that slightly vintage appearance. She fills the frame and the square crop works brilliantly here. Very well crafted indeed!
Kindest regards
Mark

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1881
1881 e2 Member 21881 vcard India
9 Jul 2014 - 7:34 PM

CLASSIC.


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