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Love flower photography but trying to push my photography a bit beyond straight images of flowers. Loved the shapes , tones and detail of this pasque flower in the rain so wanted to remove the distraction of it"s colour

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D MkII
Lens:EF100mm F/2.8 Macro USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:31 Mar 2012 - 10:14 AM
Focal Length:100mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/40sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:640
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Pasque
Username:dwarf dwarf
Uploaded:8 Jun 2012 - 7:27 AM
Tags:Black & white, Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants
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susanbarton
8 Jun 2012 - 7:57 AM

Stunning detail! You have certainly succeded, I would never have thought to present this in Mono but it works so well. Would still be interested in seeing the original Grin

Susan

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Alan_Baseley e2 Member 13321 forum postsAlan_Baseley vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jun 2012 - 8:45 AM

Super shot. Really like what you've done,
Alan

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vickyf e2 Member 8vickyf vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jun 2012 - 8:51 AM

Beautiful. Love the idea and the detail. Like Susan, I would be interested to see the original image. Vicky

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dwarf
dwarf  652 forum posts United Kingdom
8 Jun 2012 - 8:58 AM

Thanks for your positive comments. I've posted the origin; under 'modifications'
dorothy

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DalesLass
DalesLass e2 Member 32055 forum postsDalesLass vcard United Kingdom
8 Jun 2012 - 9:56 AM

Beautiful detail, great composition, love the mono.

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aliphoto
aliphoto  6
8 Jun 2012 - 8:31 PM

Both Look good with great texture. Really like bw version - I am spending too much time in geoff's company

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jun 2012 - 3:52 PM

This works really well in mono Dorothy.


I have a couple of suggestions, and nothing thats drastic, as the original shot is very good.

I would try toning down the bright highlights, and converting to a duo tone; and since its rather wide, why not crop space from the top, where the shot is losing focus, and a little on the bottom, and make it into a panoramic style.



Ive loaded a mod with this done, and a frame added to show what it will be like when you put it on a wall, where it would make a really nice print.



Hope this is helpful,



Regards



Willie

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