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Camera:Fujifilm Finepix S5000
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:rainbow
Username:emmaA emmaA
Uploaded:26 Mar 2010 - 5:21 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, General, Pens, Rainbow, Spectrum
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84270 forum postsKarenFB vcard England162 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2010 - 5:26 PM

Hi Emma, good to see you uploading again! Smile

This is a lovely image - I really like the way you have the curvy line of colour going from corner to corner. Very well thought out and taken! Smile

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lawbert
lawbert  71701 forum posts England15 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2010 - 5:51 PM

Hello Emma...This is a very well thought out and planned image,
All I would say is that the dark green pen end seems to be your focus point so possibly taking the 4 lower pens slightly further back in the set up would make this more proninent and accentuate the curve more in the foreground.
Paul

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pixclix
pixclix  7
26 Mar 2010 - 5:53 PM

Hi EmmaA such a great photo I love the curvy line you have created with the pens certainly leads your eye thru the shot.
Well done - really good shot!!!!
Regards
Terry

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dathersmith
26 Mar 2010 - 6:44 PM

A well thought out shot Emma, great composition.

Darren.

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LukeParkinson
26 Mar 2010 - 7:41 PM

I really like the dof on this one. Very well done

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U4eA
U4eA  10475 forum posts England
26 Mar 2010 - 9:29 PM

Well planned and composed, and you've made good use of a shallow DOF. If I were to make any change, it would be to tighten the crop up slightly to loose the spaces between the pens and the edge at the top and bottom.

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jeronius
jeronius  5 England1 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2010 - 12:33 PM

Good concept.
Jerry

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