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Seen while walking back to tha cable car station.

Camera:Canon 5D MK11
Lens:24-105 f4 l
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Picture Window
Username:ensign ensign
Uploaded:23 Aug 2010 - 7:49 PM
Tags:Architecture, General, Landscape / travel, Reflection, Sky, Trees, Window
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wolf1
wolf1  4 United Kingdom
23 Aug 2010 - 7:57 PM

I'm not a good enough photographer to give you any critique or advice on this shot but, I think it is a great shot, different, interesting, good colours well done.
Andy

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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2010 - 1:39 AM

You've obviously put a lot of thought into the composition of this, and I like the way you've broughtdiagonal lines in on corners. A couple of points though. Firstly, I'd crop away the bin or heater bottom left - you csan still crop from the left to a crisp diagonal line. Overall while there's a good interplay of straight and crooked lines, I wonder whether the shot is just a bit too busy with a few too many elements. In shots like this, less is often more ..

Finally, i think it could do with a tiny boost in brightness and contrast as it looks a bit flat..and also there's a bit of a blueish cast. I've done a quick mod to show a few of these things, hope that's useful

Stephen

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom853 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2010 - 7:53 PM

A very well seen image. Like it. Two little crops as already indicated.

Paul

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ensign e2 Member 7185 forum postsensign vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
25 Aug 2010 - 2:35 PM

Hi all
Thanks for taking the time to view the image and offer advise. I agree with the crops, should have seen them myself.
Look forward to further advise.
Bernard

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acousticmist
25 Aug 2010 - 2:53 PM

A great clear reflection in this shot.well done.....Martin

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