Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.
Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!
a figure would change this quite considerably, for the better? I'm not so sure.
Almost works for me... i'd be tempted to have the flower clip the frame too... would really make the viewer work and ask questions in that case. also she's looking down, although we cant see her eyes, ours follow her head direction, and that gives it a very particular feel, if that's what you wanted then cool It's always worth remembering that even if your models are half hidden we can still see (assume) a lot from their pose.
Ok, I'm with Smackmyfish, normally i'd go with the sh*t sandwich, but due to a bread shortage, you'll have to make do with it on toast, sorry.
This is very, very good work. It's a photo of contrasts, the thin willowy single 'shroom set in a lot of nice negative space, matched with the well lit cap and stem set against a dark background. This really sets it off, and gives you an emotional response to the struggle for growth. Keeping the colour at the top and the bottom also works, giving a nice border and edge to the scene.
Well, as ever, I'm going to be awkward and say that I prefer something between the two. I prefer a bit of detail in the background just to give it some context and help hold the image together. The flash has worked well here, give you some nice rim lighting, but a touch intense in places.
|Rubbish Landscapes...||13/11/2009 - 1:01 PM|
|Ansel Adams Negatives||30/10/2009 - 1:25 PM|
|Pollution||19/10/2009 - 10:25 AM|
|Vivian Maier||16/10/2009 - 4:21 PM|
|what were they thinking?||08/10/2009 - 10:51 PM|
|Irving Penn||07/10/2009 - 8:49 PM|
|Maybe we'll get a tripod||17/09/2009 - 10:05 AM|
|Let this be a lesson||06/09/2009 - 9:00 PM|
|A new photographic reality tv show is coming...||31/08/2009 - 9:10 PM|
|The Mexican Suitcase||30/04/2009 - 4:27 PM|
|Rejlander Competition||19/02/2009 - 9:25 AM|
|Taylor Wessing Photographic Portrait Prize 2009||13/01/2009 - 12:31 PM|
|Suffer from camera shake?||09/01/2009 - 2:06 PM|
|Chinese New Year - Manchester 1st feb 2009||03/01/2009 - 6:29 PM|
|Pete, don't rush||19/12/2008 - 11:44 PM|
|Photography Quotes||22/04/2011 - 11:21 AM|
|Skye meet - October this year _Facebook link included...||03/04/2011 - 7:43 PM|
|HS Flash with 580ex as the Master||03/04/2011 - 7:31 PM|
|5th Annual West of Ireland-Doolin meet 25-29 March||29/03/2011 - 11:13 AM|
|Bronica ETRS - mirror fault ?||18/02/2011 - 9:23 AM|
|Calling Ilford " FP4 " fans.!!!||06/02/2011 - 9:51 PM|
|Our Biggest Ever Christmas Prize Draw is Coming!||01/12/2010 - 10:01 PM|
|Why do atheists celebrate Christmas ?||01/12/2010 - 9:37 PM|
|Suggestion - EPZ annual competition (Landscape Photographer of the Year winners)||25/11/2010 - 10:56 PM|
|No dslr allowed||25/11/2010 - 10:27 PM|
|Scarey Videos||13/11/2010 - 9:56 PM|
|Why do I think I need a 7D?||09/11/2010 - 11:42 PM|
|Land of HERO||27/10/2010 - 11:28 PM|
|Famous Portrait Photographers||25/10/2010 - 2:14 PM|
|Filters stuck together?||22/10/2010 - 10:04 AM|
No portfolios comments on yet.