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The Roaches at sunrise
regards
Jeremy SmileSmile

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D800 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:17.0-35.0 mm f/2.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:18 Aug 2013 - 5:44 AM
Focal Length:20mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/25sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Defined
Username:fazzer fazzer
Uploaded:19 Aug 2013 - 10:20 PM
Tags:Black & white, Landscape / travel
Votes:37

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rontear
rontear e2 Member 11rontear vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
19 Aug 2013 - 10:40 PM

Strong lead in Jeremy.
Ron.

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 3Irishkate vcard United Kingdom73 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2013 - 12:11 AM

Fantastic mono - just what I need for club entries!
Excellent competition, and great shapes with good tonal range.
Vignette draws us into the heart of image.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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Nikonuser1
Nikonuser1 e2 Member 1Nikonuser1 vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2013 - 12:12 AM

A great mono image, like the wall lead in, well capturedSmile

Cliff

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boov
boov  1 United Kingdom
20 Aug 2013 - 10:05 AM

Excellent ....

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fazzer
fazzer e2 Member 528 forum postsfazzer vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2013 - 12:53 PM

Appreciate the comments, thank you Smile

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almiles
almiles  438 forum posts United Kingdom93 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2013 - 3:14 PM

The wall and the grasses look lovely with the high contrast, the wall being an irresistable lead in. The sheep in the midground stands out against the black hillside really well, adding more scale and character. If I had one suggestion, it would be the dark hillside seems a bit domineering in the image and might benefit from some selective lightening of the exposure to bring out more detail and balance the image a little more. Otherwise just spot on! Smile

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Skeet1Away
Skeet1Away e2 Member 238 forum postsSkeet1Away vcard Scotland1 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2013 - 6:09 PM

Jeremy, great contrast and tone throughout. I would leave well alone, without those darks and lights a mono image in my and its just my opinion would look bland. A fine comp, wish my p/f was as good....keep up great work so on the the right path.


Paul.

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jasonrwl
jasonrwl e2 Member 430 forum postsjasonrwl vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2013 - 6:45 PM

Very well done Jeremy - I agree with Paul
Jason

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derekhansen
derekhansen e2 Member 5179 forum postsderekhansen vcard United Kingdom19 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2013 - 7:34 PM

Like the foreground detail and the strong lead in Jeremy. The mono processing allows the high contrast and gives this loads of atmosphere.
Derek

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johnlw
johnlw e2 Member 7johnlw vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
20 Aug 2013 - 8:59 PM

Lovely mono good foreground interesting the way the land lies and great lines leading to the hill.
Regards John.

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fazzer
fazzer e2 Member 528 forum postsfazzer vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
21 Aug 2013 - 3:16 PM

Thanks everyone and thanks for the critique Al it's always good to hear how others see a shot
Regards
JSmile

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England207 Constructive Critique Points
22 Aug 2013 - 1:17 PM

Like the foreground lead and light.
Regards Richard

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marktc
marktc e2 Member 342 forum postsmarktc vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
22 Aug 2013 - 9:50 PM

Quality from front to back Jeremy, I personally like the imposing dark hill, it adds a sense of weight and drama to the shot. Very nicely composed matey.

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SteveMackay
3 Sep 2013 - 9:44 PM

Fantastic image Jeremy, your B/W conversions are perfect in my opinion!, excellent composition, details and sky......the stone wall and those two clumps of grass in the foreground are the deal breaker Wink...fantastic!

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