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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:70.0-200.0 mm
Date Taken:21 Jan 2011 - 4:11 PM
Focal Length:200mm
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:-2/3
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:feeding time
Username:floxyz floxyz
Uploaded:25 Jan 2011 - 1:20 PM
Tags:Wildlife / nature
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jinstone
jinstone e2 Member 8jinstone vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jan 2011 - 1:51 PM

Nice shot, I'm at work or would have a go myself.
I'd be inclined to do a litte bit of cloning and a very slight crop. I'd clone out the white spot at the bottom and probably the twigs between the two birds and just possibly the one top left. For the crop I'd just take the top off the feeder. If it works, and that is where it would have been nice to have a go myself then I think it could be just a little cleaner and focus more attention on the birds.
Still a great capture though.
Kind regards
Jeremy

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DitoInacio
25 Jan 2011 - 1:53 PM

Beautiful timing. Love the Birds action.
Also, nice DOF.

regards

Dito

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Eviscera
Eviscera  81097 forum posts United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jan 2011 - 7:39 PM

Quite like this , birds actually doing something , rather than sitting on sticks.

If your original can stand the crop maybe explore a more contained comp.

Slapped a quick mod that loses the irrelevance from the action.

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