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Another shot of my mischevious son, keeping still just long enough. I shot this directly into the light to back light it. I used a layer mask in elements to really bring out the contrast. I've got a couple of versions of this shot.I don't normally crop things squarely but i liked it on this occasion.I'm open to suggestions on this though.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D5100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 50mm f1.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:29 Aug 2012 - 8:14 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.7
Aperture:f/2.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Auto
Title:What, me daddy?
Username:Flymoman Flymoman
Uploaded:3 Apr 2013 - 8:53 AM
Tags:Child aged 2-3yrs, Portraits / people
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7328 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom884 Constructive Critique Points
3 Apr 2013 - 9:57 AM

Much more successful technically than the dummy shot, and really attractive, characterful. The eyes are bright and sharp, and very appealing.
I like a square crop but I'd rather see the face a bit further to the right, he seems a bit cramped on the left here.
I think this has b&w potential, I'll try to put a couple of ideas together in a Mod.
Moira

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
3 Apr 2013 - 9:58 AM

Nice image. Sharp where it needs to be and appealing. Great family shot. Might just run the burning in tool down the right side. To carry out a single simple adjustment like contrast I never bother with masks. No need in my opinion. You can go backwards with the history tool and providing you don't save the adjusted image over the original, there can be no problem.

Masks are more for complex work where you may need to go back and adjust individual layers as you work. I do single adjustments such as contrast and sharpening straight onto the base opened image.

Paul

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7328 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom884 Constructive Critique Points
3 Apr 2013 - 10:23 AM

I've uploaded two Mods - I cropped on the right and added a bit more canvas space on the left, the work is a bit patchy it's just to show the effect of having the space on the left. Assuming that you placed him centrally in a landscape frame, it's easy enough to re-crop the original. I also tried to reduce the highlight in the background top right.
For colour, I made a few adjustments - I darkened highlights by 6%, reduced saturation on red by 9% and passed the sponge tool over his teeshirt to mop up a bit of the bright green. Then I passed the burn tool very lightly (4% exposure on shadows) over the face.
For the second Mod I converted to b&w, lightening red a bit, and made a small adjustment in Levels.
Cheers,
Moira
Edit - seeing Paul's comment above, I agree about keeping the workflow simple. People get carried away with masks, there's this idea that because PS has so many options we have to use them all. These are simple procedures easily reversed - I prefer to avoid complications!

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 3 Apr 2013 - 10:28 AM

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 3Irishkate vcard United Kingdom72 Constructive Critique Points
3 Apr 2013 - 1:09 PM

Interesting use of the sponge tool - didn't know how it could be used - an excellent mod by mrswoolybill.
A lovely little fellow - good luck with your photography.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 9708 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2670 Constructive Critique Points
3 Apr 2013 - 7:41 PM

Much better shot here Stephen.

One minor niggle for me, the near eye is less sharp than the far eye, - this can be easily sorted out by sharpening the near eye only.

Colour is oversaturated (as measured, not subjective), which you may well want and like, but its also good to see what it looks like less saturated. Increasing contrast has the side effect of over saturation, so watch out for this.

My preference would be for more space on the left than right, and the eyes higher than the centre.

All done in the mods, - mod2 is softer.


Good work,



regards



Willie

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