Again Luke It's slightly over exposed on her back and on her whites. a little work is need on this one.

Quote: Superb pose and detail. Exposure is spot on, but I would guess that what just detracts and i'm sure Dad will back me up here is that it is too tight in the frame, just a little more space above and a bit more to the left would really give it the edge. Also just a little bright on the white collar.
Richard

Good Picture Luke, however Richard is quite right. The bird needs more space to look into. Remember the rule of thirds? But you have got good eye contact and detail in the picture. Well done on your Awards.