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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:EF85mm f/1.8 usm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Dec 2012 - 1:24 PM
Focal Length:85mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/2.5
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Custom
Title:Jez
Username:frankiej frankiej
Uploaded:1 Dec 2012 - 5:25 PM
Tags:Environmental portrait, Portraits / people
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Coast
Coast Critique Team 6914 forum postsCoast vcard United Kingdom290 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 5:33 PM

Has lots going for it as a portrait however I think the composition could be tighter for more impact. Good choice of aperture to keep the background soft and well exposed with good highlights and sharpness where it matters in the eyes.

For me just too much empty space around the subject that doesn't add to the environmental positioning of an environmental portrait. Lots of white sky filling the scene that takes the eye.

A little work on the composition would make the difference for me.

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