I think, you can't show me Vanessa's beauty...
Shooting from this angle with 50mm (using fullframe camera body), modify the rates (left foot vs. models face).
Pose: a little bit shy, without full feminity. For me, it's just a "Sit down, right foot down to the carpet etc".
Kepp your eyes on details - missing nail on the rigth arm's fingers.
The crop is too narrow above and bottom.
And the lights! Your lights did not excite - not for me. Your picture - from your lights settings - too flat.
Sorry for my wrong English, I just moved to the UK.
I wish you good lights, and try again - your model is beautiful and very pretty.