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This picture, is my favourite from the session. I took with Andrea, a talented hungarian dancer and model, a full-day shoot, approx one year ago. Our conception was, making some "gerilla-action" with her toe-dancer-image, in the capital of Hungary.
If you are interested the whole session, you can visit my public gallery link removed - please see site T&Cs

Thank you!

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 30D
Lens:70.0-200.0 mm f/2.8
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:3 Nov 2011 - 11:51 AM
Focal Length:50mm
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/2500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Manual
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:One picture, from my old Budapest-session
Username:gaborfoto gaborfoto
Uploaded:5 Oct 2012 - 11:50 PM
Tags:Digital art, Digitally manipulated, Fine art nude, Flash / lighting, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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paskinmj
paskinmj  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2012 - 11:54 PM

Great shot.
Matt

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gaborfoto
gaborfoto  1 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2012 - 11:56 PM

Thanks a lot, Matt!

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Jestertheclown

I rather like this.
The deliberate imperfections work well.

Bren.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2798 Constructive Critique Points
6 Oct 2012 - 2:41 PM

Ive looked at your original on your site Gabor, and I have to say I much prefer the original mono without the blue toning.

Its an excellent pose and creative shot. I wonder why you decided to tone it, - toning drops contrast, and you have lots the distant buildings also..


Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
6 Oct 2012 - 8:17 PM

Going to be a subjective one. The multitude of broken rules just a bit too much for me. The pose is great. A more conventional treatment for me.

Paul

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NEWMANP e2 Member 61583 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
6 Oct 2012 - 10:24 PM

i think the idea, composition and exposure are all great, no excellent, however im not comfortable with the processing.

maybe its a route you are driving to be different i dont know and im not over slavish about tradiition and written rules of photography at least where artistic expression is the key element but some how i feel that the quality has been disregarded for an effect that for me would come a second best to a subtle mono conversion and even then id be happy with the whites showing through.

ther may be a bit too much top for comfort and there are a couple niggkles down the left hand side pulling too much attention so im going to attempt a little crop and a mono conversion. may be better may not we will have to see what you think.

best regards
Phil

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gaborfoto
gaborfoto  1 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Oct 2012 - 2:53 PM

Bren, Willie, Paul, Phil - thank's a lot!
The whole session is b&w but for me, this picture is my favourite and think so, this version looks better

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