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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:27 May 2012 - 11:59 AM
Focal Length:70mm
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:250
Exposure Mode:Manual
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:*pure*
Username:gaborfoto gaborfoto
Uploaded:4 Mar 2013 - 11:42 AM
Tags:Black & white, Flash / lighting, General, Model, Natural light, Nude / glamour, Portfolio, Portraits / people
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djh698
djh698  101309 forum posts Canada4 Constructive Critique Points
4 Mar 2013 - 1:20 PM

I would have cloned out the frame above her head-otherwise well presented
David

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2942 Constructive Critique Points
4 Mar 2013 - 6:20 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I really like the pose and the set up Gabor. I dont know for sure if you were going for a high key look, but what I think this needs is a wider tonal range. This range starts at mid grey, and goes to white, so it looks greyish, and quite flat wheres a high key does maintain a good black level. Definitely clone the frame, its merging with her head.

Looking at composition, I would lower her in the frame, and add space on the left for an A4 format, - looks better to me. Theres a nice feature where theres a reflection under her shoes that cant be seen unless you deal with the black level.


Hope this helps,



regards


Willie (if you want the mod I did just contact me at wbaneham@gmail.com)

Last Modified By banehawi at 4 Mar 2013 - 6:21 PM

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